Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Harley meets Simba and Leo"...musings on the pets I've had
87 total reviews
Comment from marym224
Love this, Mustangpatty. I remember reading your Prologue, and thought then how different this writing was going to be. I may have mentioned a book by Paul Galliano that is written in the same vein, and it really is one you can't put down. Looking forward to more.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
Love this, Mustangpatty. I remember reading your Prologue, and thought then how different this writing was going to be. I may have mentioned a book by Paul Galliano that is written in the same vein, and it really is one you can't put down. Looking forward to more.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you are enjoying the adventures of my pets. ~patty~
Comment from joannesnow
It has been so enjoyable taking this adventure with you and Harley. You have a very genuine sincerity in your writing that allows the reader to share with you your joy and excitement. Anxiously awaiting Harley's next adventure.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
It has been so enjoyable taking this adventure with you and Harley. You have a very genuine sincerity in your writing that allows the reader to share with you your joy and excitement. Anxiously awaiting Harley's next adventure.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read the book and take the journey! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and look for more soon! ~patty~
Comment from Hayley_Loubear
Aww so sweet! An enjoyable read lots of description and imagery, love the picture too, cute cats!!! well written love it!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
Aww so sweet! An enjoyable read lots of description and imagery, love the picture too, cute cats!!! well written love it!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for continuing to read the book and take the journey! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and look for more soon! ~patty~
Comment from RKagan
Awww I knew that poor little Harley was going to get batted when he met the kitties. I have had too many pets not to know that one. Great little story. It looks like you and Harley are bonding beautifully.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
Awww I knew that poor little Harley was going to get batted when he met the kitties. I have had too many pets not to know that one. Great little story. It looks like you and Harley are bonding beautifully.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thanks for reading along with the trials and tribulations of Harley. He is actually doing well; he totally realizes that Simba is the LEADER of the pack, he can pick on Leo, and he has me wrapped around his little paw! Such fun at my house. ~patty~
Comment from Gungalo
LOL this is cute girl. Yer having a ball with these guys aren' you? LOL. Too funny the reception he got but I'm sure it is gonna all work out in the end. Somehow they always know, don't mess up too bad or someone's got to go.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
LOL this is cute girl. Yer having a ball with these guys aren' you? LOL. Too funny the reception he got but I'm sure it is gonna all work out in the end. Somehow they always know, don't mess up too bad or someone's got to go.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading along. Yes - they are keeping me on my toes, and I'm having a blast!! Glad you enjoyed! ~patty~
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Always find fun when I come to your site. I love it!!!
Comment from JW
This was another excellent chapter. You do a great job of describing each event through Harley's perspective. It makes for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
This was another excellent chapter. You do a great job of describing each event through Harley's perspective. It makes for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading along. I'm glad you enjoyed this latest chapter. ~patty~
Comment from sweetsilversong
Patty, Harley rocks.
I can just picture him taking those first tentative steps out the kennel, a big scary new world to explore.
You write with so much passion, I can feel the love you have for you new puppy, shinning through.
Very enjoyable.
Best wishes.
SSS
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
Patty, Harley rocks.
I can just picture him taking those first tentative steps out the kennel, a big scary new world to explore.
You write with so much passion, I can feel the love you have for you new puppy, shinning through.
Very enjoyable.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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I agree! Harley does rock, and he is one of the funniest dogs I've ever met. Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
Comment from L.lora
Oh Patty this is such
a well thought out and
presented charming story.
I love the pov taken here
and the discriptive voice
from Harley's view. I thoroughly
enjoyed this story, gave that
warm fuzzy feeling and put a
smile on my face...excellent.
no nits or spags. Lora
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
Oh Patty this is such
a well thought out and
presented charming story.
I love the pov taken here
and the discriptive voice
from Harley's view. I thoroughly
enjoyed this story, gave that
warm fuzzy feeling and put a
smile on my face...excellent.
no nits or spags. Lora
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and your generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story - feel free to follow the book - more Harley POV, and then I post random stories from Leo and Simba. Thank you for stopping by! ~patty~
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It was my pleasure, your unique stories have stirred my muse--now I just have to see if I can catch her...LOL. Lora
Comment from marcii
I feel that this was a nice meeting but what does one do if the get a new pet that doesn't reacted kindly with the new pet or visa a versa. I've not had two pets at a time to consider this, except fish and birds but at no time did they meet
A nice story.
Marcii
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
I feel that this was a nice meeting but what does one do if the get a new pet that doesn't reacted kindly with the new pet or visa a versa. I've not had two pets at a time to consider this, except fish and birds but at no time did they meet
A nice story.
Marcii
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Not all pets get along, and it takes patience and knowing your pets to get it all to work out. Thank you for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
Comment from bowls
I'm glad things are settling down. Once again, you've captured the thoughts and reactions of the puppy so well. You don't rush with the details, but let them develop slowly and logically so there are no gaps in the action. I can't wait to read more!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
I'm glad things are settling down. Once again, you've captured the thoughts and reactions of the puppy so well. You don't rush with the details, but let them develop slowly and logically so there are no gaps in the action. I can't wait to read more!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Your remarks lift my spirits; I'm glad you're enjoying Harley's story. ~patty~