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Comment from Peter@Poole
Absolutely lovely, Brooke. What a creative day you've spent! I particularly appreciated 'Mighty oak and minute seed' and the rhyming of stellar orion with earthly dandelion. AND, you point out that this is all created. Peter
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Absolutely lovely, Brooke. What a creative day you've spent! I particularly appreciated 'Mighty oak and minute seed' and the rhyming of stellar orion with earthly dandelion. AND, you point out that this is all created. Peter
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much, Peter - I don't often post twice in one day - I was just inspired :-) Brooke
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And you inspire others!
Comment from WRITER1
This is so true. This is something we all need to consider our planet is our universe and if we don't take care of it we may just face a lot of problems.
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This is so true. This is something we all need to consider our planet is our universe and if we don't take care of it we may just face a lot of problems.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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thanks, Donna - you are so right :-) Brooke
Comment from marion
The beauty of Creation lies
in ladybugs and spacious skies.
Look up to see it in Orion,
or stoop to pick one dandelion.
You are a true poet, aren't you.
Any style, any form ... no matter what you give us, it is said to perfection.
Marion.
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The beauty of Creation lies
in ladybugs and spacious skies.
Look up to see it in Orion,
or stoop to pick one dandelion.
You are a true poet, aren't you.
Any style, any form ... no matter what you give us, it is said to perfection.
Marion.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Thank you, Marion - you are leaving me with a huge smile :-) Brooke
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke,
I need to write another rispetto. I love the form and you have done an exceptional job with this one. I seems mystical to me and clearly states the beauty of Creation. Well done. Blessings, chey
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Hi Brooke,
I need to write another rispetto. I love the form and you have done an exceptional job with this one. I seems mystical to me and clearly states the beauty of Creation. Well done. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you, Chey - I love this form, so yes, please write another : -) Brooke
Comment from The Highlander
The best secret in the world is nature. I doubt we will ever know her entirely. As a race we are still learning, and it will be many centuries before we even start to get close. Inspirational foundation of a write Brooke, Bravo - James.
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The best secret in the world is nature. I doubt we will ever know her entirely. As a race we are still learning, and it will be many centuries before we even start to get close. Inspirational foundation of a write Brooke, Bravo - James.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you, James :-) Your comments are most insightful :-) Brooke
Comment from vandawalker
I like the contrasts and differences that all speak to the same theme of the magnificence of creation. The picture and colors you've chosen accent the words you've used. I enjoyed this very much. Good writing.
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I like the contrasts and differences that all speak to the same theme of the magnificence of creation. The picture and colors you've chosen accent the words you've used. I enjoyed this very much. Good writing.
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments and kind review - I love the art made available in FanArt :-) Brooke
Comment from El.Marjie
You're thinking a lot about oak trees lately. This is another beautiful poem, and you always speak of Creation or the Person behind it all. Thank you for continually inspiring us to look at the things around us, and not just take it all for granted. Best Blessings Brooke! Marjie
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You're thinking a lot about oak trees lately. This is another beautiful poem, and you always speak of Creation or the Person behind it all. Thank you for continually inspiring us to look at the things around us, and not just take it all for granted. Best Blessings Brooke! Marjie
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you, Marjie, for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Sally Carter
Another lovely rispetto, of which you are the undisputed queen.
Am I right in thinking this resembles a slightly longer poem you posted not so long ago, with the same contrast between the small and the spectacular? If so, the message has lost none of its potency in the retelling. And that last rhyme is just inspired!
Love it, Brooke.
Yours, Sally
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Another lovely rispetto, of which you are the undisputed queen.
Am I right in thinking this resembles a slightly longer poem you posted not so long ago, with the same contrast between the small and the spectacular? If so, the message has lost none of its potency in the retelling. And that last rhyme is just inspired!
Love it, Brooke.
Yours, Sally
Comment Written 05-May-2010
reply by the author on 05-May-2010
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Thank you, Sally - I have explored this theme a few times in different forms and with different examples :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
You do create such grand visuals with your poems. I think you must be a terribly observant person because you write about the smallest creatures of creation to the mighty universe. Well done, Brooke. Nice picture that rounds off your work. luv jada
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You do create such grand visuals with your poems. I think you must be a terribly observant person because you write about the smallest creatures of creation to the mighty universe. Well done, Brooke. Nice picture that rounds off your work. luv jada
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Thank you, Jada - I swear I just replied to this. LOL Brooke
Comment from Jarlsbane
Very nicely done! I was just thinking the other day as I was mowing my field which is filled with dandelions how petty they really are. If only they didn't take everything over!
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Very nicely done! I was just thinking the other day as I was mowing my field which is filled with dandelions how petty they really are. If only they didn't take everything over!
Comment Written 05-May-2010
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Is that a Freudian slip, typing that they are petty? LOL Thanks, Michael :-) Brooke
