Woodland Secrets Part Three
ottava rima - see author's notes94 total reviews
Comment from Colette
Thank you Brooke for this wonderful poem I will read and
re-read it many times, I am making it part of my precious
memories box. You are a wonderful poetess.
Hugs and Respect :) Colette
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you Brooke for this wonderful poem I will read and
re-read it many times, I am making it part of my precious
memories box. You are a wonderful poetess.
Hugs and Respect :) Colette
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Colette - that is most flattering to hear you will read it again :-) Brooke
Comment from Aussie
Just a thought. Could you use the old word 'bid the couple live in love divine? I think you must have been a fairy in your last life and gave birth to a fairy as well. Both of you love the impish gatherings and little people that not many humans see. I loved all of your poem/story and hope you will write more. Because I belong to the one-legged garden gnome club!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Just a thought. Could you use the old word 'bid the couple live in love divine? I think you must have been a fairy in your last life and gave birth to a fairy as well. Both of you love the impish gatherings and little people that not many humans see. I loved all of your poem/story and hope you will write more. Because I belong to the one-legged garden gnome club!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I like the bid suggestion and have made the edit already - thank you for such a good idea! :-) You are such a good-natured soul, Kay - thank you!!! Brooke
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Good Morning Brooke, I'm not just a one-legged garden gnome and now you owe me a coffee! Love, Kay.
Comment from MsRefusenik
I would love to know what's been concealed. This poem could go on another 20 or so sections for my money and great delight. I have enjoyed it so very much. But the sun is coming up and the party is over so I must leave like the rest of the magical guests. What a delight this has been!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I would love to know what's been concealed. This poem could go on another 20 or so sections for my money and great delight. I have enjoyed it so very much. But the sun is coming up and the party is over so I must leave like the rest of the magical guests. What a delight this has been!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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If it went on another 20 sections, I would go batty! Maybe someday I will add to it, but for now, beddy bye! THanks so much, Maryellen :-) Brooke
Comment from laren
It's a lovely poem in a very good writting, about enchanted places with magic beings where the core of the poem is love.
Congratulations!
Best regards,
Laren
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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It's a lovely poem in a very good writting, about enchanted places with magic beings where the core of the poem is love.
Congratulations!
Best regards,
Laren
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Laren, thank you for such a positive and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from BJean
How about if I pay you?:) I popped in for just a minute to catch the last part. I think now that this really happened or you could not have told this tale!!!!!!
Great job and work. Jean
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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How about if I pay you?:) I popped in for just a minute to catch the last part. I think now that this really happened or you could not have told this tale!!!!!!
Great job and work. Jean
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Jean, I'm not saying! :-) Now, how much was that payment going to be?? We all have our price. LOL Thanks so much. Brooke :-)
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Probably more than i can afford right now? Hey, we've gotten to be friends, haven't we!!!! Jean
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke...I was glad you see you had posted number three in this series while the second part was still clear in my mind. This one is every bit as wonderful as the other two. I love the ending, it is appropriate to leave the reader wanting to know what has been concealed! Roses at your feet...you may now take a bow....blessings....chey
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Hi Brooke...I was glad you see you had posted number three in this series while the second part was still clear in my mind. This one is every bit as wonderful as the other two. I love the ending, it is appropriate to leave the reader wanting to know what has been concealed! Roses at your feet...you may now take a bow....blessings....chey
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I had to write them one right after another or I would have lost sight myself of what had gone on before! Thanks so much, Chey :-) You are truly gracious with such lovely comments. Brooke
Comment from Jazh
Never know indeed! lol I'm so glad you were invited in to this event. The whole thing flows together well, with some wonderful images - definitely one for your grandchildren. :)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Never know indeed! lol I'm so glad you were invited in to this event. The whole thing flows together well, with some wonderful images - definitely one for your grandchildren. :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Adele, thank you :-) Forget the grandchildren - this is one for my daughter! LOL Brooke
Comment from laurelp
A little bit of Midsummers Night's Drean mixed within the poetry you have written. Each part is better than the last yet together as a whole they were quite wonderful. Now, sadly, back to unpacking.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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A little bit of Midsummers Night's Drean mixed within the poetry you have written. Each part is better than the last yet together as a whole they were quite wonderful. Now, sadly, back to unpacking.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Laurel - I so appreciate your taking the time to read this in the midst of all your unpacking :-) Brooke
Comment from jaeladarling
I just realized that I didn't add any of these to my bookcase. What was I thinking? LOL A beautiful, albeit bittersweet, end to this poem-story. (I say "bittersweet" because it ended well, but I didn't want it to end!)
Great work - a pleasure to read. I am now off to bookcase. Cheers!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I just realized that I didn't add any of these to my bookcase. What was I thinking? LOL A beautiful, albeit bittersweet, end to this poem-story. (I say "bittersweet" because it ended well, but I didn't want it to end!)
Great work - a pleasure to read. I am now off to bookcase. Cheers!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, my friend :-) I'm sorry you're sad to have it end, but my mental well-being depended on its ending! LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is a very good ending to the poem again has a very good feel to it and very good descriptions of what is going on a very enjoyable poem regards Fuller
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Yes this is a very good ending to the poem again has a very good feel to it and very good descriptions of what is going on a very enjoyable poem regards Fuller
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Fuller, thank you :-) I appreciate your kind reviews, always :-) Brooke
