Sink Or Swim Together!
We'll rise or fall together!64 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, clear and creative. I found the theme
of this poem to be thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork compliments this poem well.
May you be well and safe......
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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The author's words are engaging, clear and creative. I found the theme
of this poem to be thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork compliments this poem well.
May you be well and safe......
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Harmony13,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from Sally Law
A good and wise wise within this small little poem. 'Tis true and hopefully we will respond in love for others and thinking of how we can get back to work. I think we are paralyzed right now and must get past this and get productive. Meals must be had to feed out families and survive. Starvation and inflation can kill just as quickly if not quicker.
Sending you my best today as always
Sally :)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A good and wise wise within this small little poem. 'Tis true and hopefully we will respond in love for others and thinking of how we can get back to work. I think we are paralyzed right now and must get past this and get productive. Meals must be had to feed out families and survive. Starvation and inflation can kill just as quickly if not quicker.
Sending you my best today as always
Sally :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Sally,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Wishes'.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Cindy Warren
I hope this crisis will bring people together. Yes, we need to think again, and again after that. That seems to be hard for some people. We need to listen to the medical experts and follow their advice. There is no quick solution.
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I hope this crisis will bring people together. Yes, we need to think again, and again after that. That seems to be hard for some people. We need to listen to the medical experts and follow their advice. There is no quick solution.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
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Hello Cindy Warren,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Your syllable count is perfect. I really like the rhyme--I see it as an added bonus. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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You did a great job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Your syllable count is perfect. I really like the rhyme--I see it as an added bonus. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Jan,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Best Wishes'.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Certainly, all good advice in light of the pandemic. However, we don't know what the next day will bring so your presentation sizzles. Be optimistic, stay safe.
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Certainly, all good advice in light of the pandemic. However, we don't know what the next day will bring so your presentation sizzles. Be optimistic, stay safe.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Raffaelina Lowcock,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Wishes'.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
It appears the question of demise or boxed in choice to choose to rise, is offset by individuals being wise enough and not choosing either one or the other but the truth! When you take the mob out of the situation and you take the lie out too, the only alternative is the third, the truth, and nothing but the truth! An interesting 20 syllable piece of rhyming written for the express purpose to cogitate. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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It appears the question of demise or boxed in choice to choose to rise, is offset by individuals being wise enough and not choosing either one or the other but the truth! When you take the mob out of the situation and you take the lie out too, the only alternative is the third, the truth, and nothing but the truth! An interesting 20 syllable piece of rhyming written for the express purpose to cogitate. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Govanni,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by "'Buona Fortuna' in the contest".
[ Lovely words! ]
With best wishes,
~ RP
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y/w giovanni
Comment from Drew Delaney
In Japan they are experiencing the second wave already. If we let our guard down, that will happen here as well. Patience is the key. I wish people would think twice about opening up the work places too soon.
Drew
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In Japan they are experiencing the second wave already. If we let our guard down, that will happen here as well. Patience is the key. I wish people would think twice about opening up the work places too soon.
Drew
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Drew,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from Cybertron1986
Beautiful and creative presentation for the sign of the times. The thought did come across my mind about how one person, maybe two or three, can alter the state of the being with one bad choice. I love that ending...not twice, but three times. So true! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Beautiful and creative presentation for the sign of the times. The thought did come across my mind about how one person, maybe two or three, can alter the state of the being with one bad choice. I love that ending...not twice, but three times. So true! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Cybertron1986,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
~ RP
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello RPSaxena
With your excellent rhyming as a message with your question
Yes, everyone as a choice take heed to what each one on this Earth should do to combat this virus that is traveling virus as you said-
BE wise and think three times and to take time to realize by not taking precautions of how deadly this virus really is.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello RPSaxena
With your excellent rhyming as a message with your question
Yes, everyone as a choice take heed to what each one on this Earth should do to combat this virus that is traveling virus as you said-
BE wise and think three times and to take time to realize by not taking precautions of how deadly this virus really is.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Gert,
Thank you very much for your detailed review, so uplifting and morale boosting comments.
Please accept my HEARTFELT GRATITUDE for the most coveted SIX STARS.
With best wishes
~ RP
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You are so welcome
Comment from Victoria Grace
Such a sweet poem! I love the artwork along with the piece. It's so true. We are either a "collective rise or demise". The power is within all of us to choose. I love the message. Great job and good luck friend!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Such a sweet poem! I love the artwork along with the piece. It's so true. We are either a "collective rise or demise". The power is within all of us to choose. I love the message. Great job and good luck friend!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Victoria Grace,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck'.
With best wishes
~ RP
