Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello Teresa, I don't know why but I kept thinking of the Rolling Stones and Mick Jagger strutting across the stage like a rooster looking for a hen. Anyway... those were my concert going days. I like your poem, I've been to a few gay clubs in Sacramento, they are fun places to visit once in a while. Good job!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

thanks so much:)

Comment from crzypnter

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Hi Teresa,
Yes one can defiantly use their imagination for this guy. I think I might off met him once myself. Lol great descriptive poem. Thanks for sharing
God bless

August

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

thanks August:)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a very strongly drawn word picture of the man. You handle the metaphor of the rooster with delightful humour and innuendo. Full of machismo and going nowhere! I have seen the type. Obscene!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

lol. Thanks so much.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I would think the entire things would be annoying. Saw your title and thought how I watch people at Walmart and how so engrossed they are when checking out. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Thanks Ben. I like people watching.

Comment from Emily George

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I can see him, he does the rounds! Is it the same guy, ha ha, sadly there are a few of them around whoop whoop. I guess it takes all kinds. There's a bird in Australia called the whoop whoop bird he makes that sound every morning at dawn over and over it's a mating call. Just popped into my mind I don't know why lol.
Great poem for a laugh.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

lol - I think his was a mating call too - lol. Thanks for the review:)

Comment from jgirlie152

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Great descriptive poem of the whoop-de-whoop guy who thought he was so "hot".
I admire you for writing this in the manner you did, and not pulling any punches.
Best regards, Joan

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Thank you Joan:) ah hot is the word to use these days - lol.

Comment from cmowen87

Excellent

You did a fantastic job of painting this picture in my mind. No photo necessary. I loved your flow throughtout. It was,almost like you were having a conversation with readers. Great job

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Thank you for the great review:)

Comment from justafan

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I bet that was a sight...lol. My daughter keeps telling me she is going to take me to a gay bar to see the drag show...of course I am still waiting :). Don't know if I have told you but my beautiful daughter is lesbian and I am her very proud rainbow mom. :)
I love this poem you have treated us to my friend. Blessings to you and yours hon.

Always,
Missy

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Yes, you did tell me. I am so glad you are supportive:) The drag queens - I still don't get them but the shows are fun to watch for awhile. Thank you Missy:)

reply by justafan on 08-Jul-2015

Love is love my pet...I am proud to know you!

Comment from GregoryCody

Excellent

Oh this is interesting. I love how unique it is in its flow. Great word choices too. Strong voice comes out.

A tambourine he beat,
singing (shouting)

That is Awesome!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Thanks Greg:)

reply by GregoryCody on 08-Jul-2015

I Love your style. I would never think to put that in parenthesis. Wow. Love it.

Comment from dmt1967

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Yes I know the type. They are very loud and dramatic lol. You get that in straight people as well. We call it camp. This poem describes a very vulgar person who I wouldn't like to meet lol. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015

Yep, they come in all shapes and sizes - lol. Thanks so much.