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just to say goodbye

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Comment from judiverse
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This is a lovely tribute. She certainly left too soon but had many friends here at FanStory. I love your lines "I tried to find you everywhere just didn't search the sky." Really powerful lines. There is a heartfelt regret that you didn't get to say good bye, but you also acknowledge that memories remain. Your words are very touching throughout. judi

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    HI Judi, thank you so much for your very touching review...I wish we would have known...I just knew she was sick...but not how bad...thank you!!! Luff Linda xxoo
reply by judiverse on 22-Jul-2014
    Hi, l.raven. You're so welcome. I've heard that from others--that they didn't know she was that ill. Sometimes people don't find about about their illness until it's pretty late. judi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I think Pam's death was a shock to all of us. It took me a while to handle it. I keep looking for her posts. I still miss her greatly. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Hi Barbara, I do the same thing...it truly was a shock...I miss her too!!!thank you so much...and you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Muffins
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I felt the compassion and sorrow from every word in this beautiful tribute poem to Pam. Although I didn't know her, ( I'm new to this site) the response to her passing tells me that she was a special lady.

These lines: I tried to find
you everywhere

just didn't search the sky." Is a line everyone who lost someone dear and say.

I'm sure Pam is joyful with this poem you wrote for her.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Hi Muffins, thank you for your touching review...she was a special lady...I am so glad you like it...thank you!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Kingsrookviii
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It is amazing to look at the body of her work. She left an imprint of her soul there for all to see. I like this tribute and so far as I am concerned, it's never too late for such noble intentions as this poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    thank you for your wonderful touching review...she truly left her footprint on our souls...so miss her...just wish I could have said good-bye...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from costellsgirl33
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This is simply just lovely!
So emotional and sweet and sad
all wrapped into one lovely treat.
Pam would be delighted and feel honored
I am sure of it

Great job my friend

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    HI Costellsgirl, thank you so much for the wonderful six...I do miss her...just wanted to say good-bye...I hope she likes it...thank you for a wonderful review...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by costellsgirl33 on 22-Jul-2014
    You are very welcome my friend! . It was lovely. Have a great day

    Arnetta
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
    you have one too...luff
reply by costellsgirl33 on 23-Jul-2014
    :)
reply by costellsgirl33 on 23-Jul-2014
    :)
Comment from CR Delport
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Since I joined FanStory, it is actually sad how many talented people we have lost, but their words will live forever. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    HI CR, we really have lost some wonderful poets ...and writers lately...so heartbreaking...it is amazing how we get so close...without meeting...we are s family...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from mjac777
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I'm new to Fan Story so I never knew Pam but read so many tributes and poems to her. She must have been something!
Yours is a favorite of mine.... simply stated and easy to understand.
I especially liked the lines:

"I tried to find
you everywhere

just didn't search the sky"

Beautiful.
Well done.


 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Hi Mjac, thank you so much for your kind words...she was truly a wonderful person...and a brilliant writer...I so miss her...just wanted to say good-bye...thank you!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Genya
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What a beautiful way to say goodbye to someone you really needed to say farewell to. We all know it is never too late. I never knew Pam, but l am sure she will be missed and her writing will be missed by so many. Lovely words with a true to heart feeling. Genya

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    HI Genya, Pam's (Gungalo) poems are staying on FanStory...you can go to find a member and read them...you will love them...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Ekim777
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As life is so often a chain of lost opportunities, so too much time is lost in a long good-bye. Mourning is vital but let us not get lost in past memories. Our poet manages to render his final farewell. With respect. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Hi Ekim, thank you so much...do miss her...Thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
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Literate and with curious rhymes this seems an earnest fitting tribute, and as reviewer, I see no glaring defects
in its construction.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Ni LIJ, thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo