Tantalizing Eyes
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Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I do hope Peggy is finally out of the picture for good.
She really is a very vicious and destructive person.
Left to themselves maybe Steve and Leya will finally be able to sort things out and get their marriage on an even keel.
Juliette
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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I do hope Peggy is finally out of the picture for good.
She really is a very vicious and destructive person.
Left to themselves maybe Steve and Leya will finally be able to sort things out and get their marriage on an even keel.
Juliette
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
That was a really good chapter, you don't always need action. Plenty of questions were answered and the dialogue carried the story through. Their relationship is bonding nicely which is quite satisfying after all the 'will they, won't they' build up.
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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That was a really good chapter, you don't always need action. Plenty of questions were answered and the dialogue carried the story through. Their relationship is bonding nicely which is quite satisfying after all the 'will they, won't they' build up.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Charlene0513
To barbara.wilkey,
A striking and yet bizarre turn of events between Leya and
Peggy.A fanatic Peggy may be but I'm sure she has more tricks up her sleeves.
It is really up to see if Steven is strong enough to stay grounded and stay the course with Leya.
One typo:
A smile[d] crossed Peggy's lips.
Charlene
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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To barbara.wilkey,
A striking and yet bizarre turn of events between Leya and
Peggy.A fanatic Peggy may be but I'm sure she has more tricks up her sleeves.
It is really up to see if Steven is strong enough to stay grounded and stay the course with Leya.
One typo:
A smile[d] crossed Peggy's lips.
Charlene
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Thank you for catching that typo. I appreciate it. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Harrisa
I'm glad they got rid of Peggy, and Leya didn't get mad about the straws, and I'm glad Leya and Steven are working things out. They belong together. This was another good chapter.
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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I'm glad they got rid of Peggy, and Leya didn't get mad about the straws, and I'm glad Leya and Steven are working things out. They belong together. This was another good chapter.
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very good chapter and shows progress between the two to mend the fences. It has very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your successful continuation of this story.
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"I can't believe someone like you married me." "I can't believe someone like you (would marry)married me."
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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This is a very good chapter and shows progress between the two to mend the fences. It has very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your successful continuation of this story.
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"I can't believe someone like you married me." "I can't believe someone like you (would marry)married me."
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Thank you for the review and I made the change.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
Besides, make ups are fantastic - add comma
I like that Leya is making Steven squirm just a little - and that Peggy, she sure is insufferable to the bitter end. Plenty of action on the horizon - oh boy, I'm fastening my seat belt. In the meantime, it was nice to see them admitting their love. Brooke :-)
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Besides, make ups are fantastic - add comma
I like that Leya is making Steven squirm just a little - and that Peggy, she sure is insufferable to the bitter end. Plenty of action on the horizon - oh boy, I'm fastening my seat belt. In the meantime, it was nice to see them admitting their love. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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I added that pesky little comma. I hate those things, but I guess they are a necessary evil. Thank you for your review and continued support.
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Well done, Barbara. The chapter has an artful written dialogue and well flowing narrative.
Your story continues to entertain me.
Great job.
Isaiah Ramesses
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reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Well done, Barbara. The chapter has an artful written dialogue and well flowing narrative.
Your story continues to entertain me.
Great job.
Isaiah Ramesses
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Comment Written 15-May-2010
reply by the author on 15-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support.
