Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

Well I'd be scurrying if someone was going to have me for lunch. No worries, just hurrys. LOL. I enjoyed this little light-heared poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

I think that would be a good move, Joy :-) Thanks, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from bohemiangeek

Excellent

Boy your poem perfectly describes my Monday through Friday. This was amusing and your writing followed smoothly. Nicely done : )

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Thank you, bohemiangeek. Sorry you have a good reason to relate. Brooke :-)

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

To adewpearl,
A poem describing the inescapable pace that we as humans go at for fear we are going to lose out on the big catch.
Great way of getting the message across.
May you have a very blessed and "Happy Easter."
Charlene

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Happy Easter, Charlene, and thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Brooke,
what ever inspired you to write your humorous thoughts put a silly grin upon my face
Great use of the required words.

Gert

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Thanks so much, Gert - I'm glad you had fun with this because I did too :-) Brooke

Comment from RazberryBullet

Excellent

Lovely! I found myself smiling as I read the poem. Liked the 's' usage for the action :) Great rhyme scheme, too, not at all forced!

Well done!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hey brooke,

how cute! ain't it the truth? there's no need to 'scamper' around, no need to worry. it's all gonna work out. Thanks for the fun reminder!!

smiles,

deb

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Thank you, Deb - I hope your reading and reviewing means you're feeling well today :-) Brooke

reply by debskatz on 03-Apr-2010

Hey,

I'm feeling better. That hospital stay threw me in a lot of ways & is taking a while to get back to myself.

Hope you have a GREAT Easter!

deb :-)

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

I hope you have a great and healthy Easter :-) You take care of your precious self!!!

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

Hey, this is really pretty good. You managed to use the required amount of words to form this poem. I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Thank you, Rose,for your positive comments :-) Brooke

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

What an enjoyable poem, Brooke. I loved all your s-action verbs and it gave the poem a light and jumpy kind of feel that made me smile.
Karyn :>)

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Thank you, Karyn - glad you enjoyed my fun with verbs :-) Brooke

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Wisdom displayed as humor. This is so true. I learned long ago that I don't own things, things own me. Yet I continue to collect things. Your art and color scheme work with your words to make this a delight to read.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010

Thank you, Jean. So glad you found meaning in the humor :-) Brooke

Comment from Aislinge

Excellent

What a fun poem! Love the imagery of the movement--scuttle, scramble, etc. Really gives a good feel for the rushing we do during our days.

Thanks for a great read!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2010

Thank you so much, Aislinge, for this thoughtful review :-) Brooke