Cocoon
Repose and Renewal115 total reviews
Comment from hankyc
What a wonderful piece of writing you have here. I was able to thoroughly enjoy reading it and associated perfectly with the idea of staying out of life, if only just for a moment
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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What a wonderful piece of writing you have here. I was able to thoroughly enjoy reading it and associated perfectly with the idea of staying out of life, if only just for a moment
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you hankyc!
Comment from Pen&Ink
Hello amada,
Nothing at all wrong with your premise. Sometimes we each need to simply withdraw from the world, let it go on its own, and then jump back in when we are ready. You'll know when the time is right.
Nice, simple poem dealing with a profound topic.
Ray
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hello amada,
Nothing at all wrong with your premise. Sometimes we each need to simply withdraw from the world, let it go on its own, and then jump back in when we are ready. You'll know when the time is right.
Nice, simple poem dealing with a profound topic.
Ray
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you Ray!
Comment from samandlancelot
I like the look of your presentation with the short lines and long box, keeping you in your cocoon, or within yourself. Sometimes we need to exclude outside interferences to find out what we want in life.
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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I like the look of your presentation with the short lines and long box, keeping you in your cocoon, or within yourself. Sometimes we need to exclude outside interferences to find out what we want in life.
Patricia
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you Patricia for reading and commenting in my work.
Comment from robertdarkstars
A witty and charming poem which I enjoyed reading. Everybody can relate to this as we all need to shut ourselves off from the world sometimes.
Love This:-
Time to honor
the complex
simplicity
of my inner clock.
Well worth 5 stars . Robert D.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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A witty and charming poem which I enjoyed reading. Everybody can relate to this as we all need to shut ourselves off from the world sometimes.
Love This:-
Time to honor
the complex
simplicity
of my inner clock.
Well worth 5 stars . Robert D.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you Robert for reading and commenting in this work.
Comment from Eternal Muse
What an original theme and presentation. Yes, wrapped in one's cocoon is not a bad idea (lol); as often we need to retrieve in our inner shell to concentrate and reflect. Great presentation too.
This impressed me:
Let the world
swirl
and see it all
as if through
a slow motion
old mechanical
reel.
Very much liked your metaphor of the "complex simplicity of your inner clock"
Great writing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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What an original theme and presentation. Yes, wrapped in one's cocoon is not a bad idea (lol); as often we need to retrieve in our inner shell to concentrate and reflect. Great presentation too.
This impressed me:
Let the world
swirl
and see it all
as if through
a slow motion
old mechanical
reel.
Very much liked your metaphor of the "complex simplicity of your inner clock"
Great writing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you yeltel for liking the thought of the "reel." Just watch, unattached!
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi amada,
Good poem setting out that inner need to sometimes just shut out the world and let the wounded soul repair quietly. Good work.
Patrick
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hi amada,
Good poem setting out that inner need to sometimes just shut out the world and let the wounded soul repair quietly. Good work.
Patrick
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you Patrick for reading this work and commenting on it. Much appreciated.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Amada, I loved this urge to hibernate for just a while. One owes it to yourself to take time out and just evaluate your values and position again. I loved the poem. Quiet time is quality time.
Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hi Amada, I loved this urge to hibernate for just a while. One owes it to yourself to take time out and just evaluate your values and position again. I loved the poem. Quiet time is quality time.
Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you, java. luv goes back to you!
Comment from beadyredeyes
Its a very vivid poem. Not only with the language but with the shape of the poem.
It poem has a soft, languid feel to it.
I like the line: "complex simplicity of my inner clock," its fun to say!
Nice work.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Its a very vivid poem. Not only with the language but with the shape of the poem.
It poem has a soft, languid feel to it.
I like the line: "complex simplicity of my inner clock," its fun to say!
Nice work.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for commenting on the phrase you liked the best!
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
I love my solitude and I know exactly what you are saying within this post. I have never understood people who don't enjoy their own company. Well written with an unusual, but intriguing as well as artistic format.
Pea
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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I love my solitude and I know exactly what you are saying within this post. I have never understood people who don't enjoy their own company. Well written with an unusual, but intriguing as well as artistic format.
Pea
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Good am dear Pea. This subject is very dear to me because i am never alone with myself. I like wrapped myself in a mystical cocoon and be just a spectator. Sweet!
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
The self-exploration theme and application is tremendously executed in this lovely poem. It is very deep and i loved each line and my excitement enhanced and heart beat raised.
Two thumbs up!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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The self-exploration theme and application is tremendously executed in this lovely poem. It is very deep and i loved each line and my excitement enhanced and heart beat raised.
Two thumbs up!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for reading and commenting in this work.
