Quaterns: Observations on Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Does God Reside within the Barn?"Assorted Reflections
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Comment from tteach
When roosters crow and cats chase mice,
while Grandpa tells the kids a yarn,
as life is lived in every way,
does God reside within the barn?
I am SO glad that you got Grandpa in there! He adds to the nostalgic, family-view of the scene. Again, as you do so well, you paint the scene, and fill it with children, animals, Grandpa, and God.
It's a good question that you pose. Does God reside in the barn? business? house? Or does He stop at the door, and let whatever will happen, happen?
I like to think that He is everywhere. It gives a warm fuzzy feeling.
well done
terry
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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When roosters crow and cats chase mice,
while Grandpa tells the kids a yarn,
as life is lived in every way,
does God reside within the barn?
I am SO glad that you got Grandpa in there! He adds to the nostalgic, family-view of the scene. Again, as you do so well, you paint the scene, and fill it with children, animals, Grandpa, and God.
It's a good question that you pose. Does God reside in the barn? business? house? Or does He stop at the door, and let whatever will happen, happen?
I like to think that He is everywhere. It gives a warm fuzzy feeling.
well done
terry
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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I like to think He is everywhere too - I just don't think he micro-manages :-) Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Janelle
I really like this one Brooke. The Quatern is a difficult style to write; keeping to the rules and still managing to have a consistant rythmn and build a scene or story that ties in with the dominant line.
It was a very pensive piece and enjoyable read, with the colour choices and picture adding the final touches to a lovely poem. Great job, regards, Jan
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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I really like this one Brooke. The Quatern is a difficult style to write; keeping to the rules and still managing to have a consistant rythmn and build a scene or story that ties in with the dominant line.
It was a very pensive piece and enjoyable read, with the colour choices and picture adding the final touches to a lovely poem. Great job, regards, Jan
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Jan, I absolutely love this form - thank you for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Brooke what a wonderful philospy poem for all to read.
And I can just picture a child hearing your poem about God and the animals what an unique idea
does, God live in a barn
Big smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Hello Brooke what a wonderful philospy poem for all to read.
And I can just picture a child hearing your poem about God and the animals what an unique idea
does, God live in a barn
Big smiles
Gert
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Gert, thank you - I hope you're having a lovely Sunday evening :-) Brooke
Comment from RG Hamilton
Yes, Yes, Yes!! He does and you've captured it here. Another lovely write. I am so happy when I read your work...soothing, gentle, inspiring. I have to be one of your biggest fans though I am sure that you have many.
Rob
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Yes, Yes, Yes!! He does and you've captured it here. Another lovely write. I am so happy when I read your work...soothing, gentle, inspiring. I have to be one of your biggest fans though I am sure that you have many.
Rob
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Rob, not any that I enjoy having more than you!!! :-) Thanks so much for another affirming and uplifting review ;-) Brooke
oh, and I'm glad to make you happy after that nightmare poem I just read! LOL
Comment from EllenV
Love how the beginning line and ending line are exactly the same, asking such an important question. I enjoyed a delightful time with you in the barn among the horses, leaping and laughing children, Grandpa, cats, roosters, cows, and, most important - God.
Thank you for a very satisfying read, Brooke.
Love,
ellen
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Love how the beginning line and ending line are exactly the same, asking such an important question. I enjoyed a delightful time with you in the barn among the horses, leaping and laughing children, Grandpa, cats, roosters, cows, and, most important - God.
Thank you for a very satisfying read, Brooke.
Love,
ellen
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Ellen, thank you - glad you had a good time with this one :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
Brooke,
This is a creative poem about life on the farm and God. God is everywhere! How great is that?!
I like how you move the repeating line throughout the poem, another way of showing how God can be everywhere.
Great colors and presentation, your poem blending with the heavens!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Brooke,
This is a creative poem about life on the farm and God. God is everywhere! How great is that?!
I like how you move the repeating line throughout the poem, another way of showing how God can be everywhere.
Great colors and presentation, your poem blending with the heavens!
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Thank you, Nadine - I think you're the first one to notice how the repeating line of the quatern works well here to show God's presence because of its movement down the verse. Brooke
Comment from jmyron
God resides everywhere. He resides in the hearts of the good. He resides in the hearts of the heartless, though they may not know it. He resides in our homes. And yes, He resides in our barns.
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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God resides everywhere. He resides in the hearts of the good. He resides in the hearts of the heartless, though they may not know it. He resides in our homes. And yes, He resides in our barns.
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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So glad you agree - thank you!! Brooke :-)
Comment from Rabianabian
An interesting poem. You have really been doing this form a lot lately, but it is good every time. Lovely imagery, you create the most wonderful pictures in my mind.
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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An interesting poem. You have really been doing this form a lot lately, but it is good every time. Lovely imagery, you create the most wonderful pictures in my mind.
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Thanks again, Mary :-) Brooke
Comment from Irrelevant
An enjoyable read that makes me stop to consider your words here. This has a very strong rhythm that moves well and I especially liked the refrain line you chose. Works very well in this piece. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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An enjoyable read that makes me stop to consider your words here. This has a very strong rhythm that moves well and I especially liked the refrain line you chose. Works very well in this piece. Nicely done.
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Thank you! Happy Sunday :-) Brooke
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Adewpearl ....
And the answer is 'Yes!' God is everywhere.
This is a beautiful poem with so many colourful and descriptive words and phrases that you have provided
clear and vivid imagery for your readers.
I specially like your description of children jumping from the bales of hay and Grandpa telling them stories.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Hullo Adewpearl ....
And the answer is 'Yes!' God is everywhere.
This is a beautiful poem with so many colourful and descriptive words and phrases that you have provided
clear and vivid imagery for your readers.
I specially like your description of children jumping from the bales of hay and Grandpa telling them stories.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 17-May-2009
reply by the author on 17-May-2009
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Nanette Mary, thank you for your wonderful comments :-) Brooke
