The Minute Poem
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Snowfall"minute poems
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Comment from nora arjuna
Oh you did it again! and again i enjoyed the read. i haven't figured about my entry yet lol. thanks for the needed inspiration.
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Oh you did it again! and again i enjoyed the read. i haven't figured about my entry yet lol. thanks for the needed inspiration.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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I'm sure you'll come up with something good! thanks, Brooke
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been thinking about it on and off, nothing yet. hey check my writing prompt - a mini-monoverse contest.
Comment from Fleedleflump
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There you go Brooke; you made me smile with your gentle ode-cum-satire on winter! The format seems to work with this one too; I'm not sure of the why, but that in itself is a success :-)
Mike
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There you go Brooke; you made me smile with your gentle ode-cum-satire on winter! The format seems to work with this one too; I'm not sure of the why, but that in itself is a success :-)
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Mike - satire? this didn't sound like a sincere ode to winter's beauty?? LOL Thanks, Brooke
Comment from Domino
Hi, Brooke, though the minute poem is not a fav of mine (I find one can't help writing stutteringly cos of its restrictions) I admire ya navin a go an succeeding so well.
Imagery and humour accomplished. Ray xx
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Hi, Brooke, though the minute poem is not a fav of mine (I find one can't help writing stutteringly cos of its restrictions) I admire ya navin a go an succeeding so well.
Imagery and humour accomplished. Ray xx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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I love the rhythm of them. :-) Thanks for saying it's funny!! :-) Brooke
Comment from Joyce L.
Yes, I have to agree with you on the weather, enough is enough. Although, the snow and ice makes for a beautiful picture when we look out, I am more than ready to move on.
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Yes, I have to agree with you on the weather, enough is enough. Although, the snow and ice makes for a beautiful picture when we look out, I am more than ready to move on.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Yep, and pictures only need last one or two seconds! LOL Thanks, Brooke
Comment from teafor2
adewpearl--Excellent use of this structured form
to express a realistic and bittersweet denouement.
Artwork vividly help sums up the ending stanza and
the feelings of scribe and this reviewer. Ditto!
teafor2
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adewpearl--Excellent use of this structured form
to express a realistic and bittersweet denouement.
Artwork vividly help sums up the ending stanza and
the feelings of scribe and this reviewer. Ditto!
teafor2
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Thanks so much for an understanding review! Brooke
Comment from Maurice WA Johnson
Yup, you're fed up with winter OK. Loved the sentiment of the first two verses, followed by the hard practicality of the last. The form sits wonderfully with the words. Congrats, so tired of seeing the words squeezed to fit the form, it's nice to see such mastery of form.
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Yup, you're fed up with winter OK. Loved the sentiment of the first two verses, followed by the hard practicality of the last. The form sits wonderfully with the words. Congrats, so tired of seeing the words squeezed to fit the form, it's nice to see such mastery of form.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Maurice - thank you :-) Brooke
Comment from Dreamdancer
LOL...
You got me with the ending my friend! This was a wonderful write and it makes me think of the time I spent in Indiana... Awesome and thank you for sharing my friend... Dreamdancer
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LOL...
You got me with the ending my friend! This was a wonderful write and it makes me think of the time I spent in Indiana... Awesome and thank you for sharing my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Glad this one gave you a laugh! Thanks, Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
A great poem about the beauty and frustration of this season. It's been so snowy and so dern cold this year...but I still love it.
Indy :>)
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A great poem about the beauty and frustration of this season. It's been so snowy and so dern cold this year...but I still love it.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Indy, thanks so much, even if you love snow!! Brooke
Comment from lovemyta
My poems, too, have been about being tired over winter. I am just plain tired of being cold! Winter has to get over soon. I am tired of slipping and sliding and worrying about falling! It has to get over soon!!!
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My poems, too, have been about being tired over winter. I am just plain tired of being cold! Winter has to get over soon. I am tired of slipping and sliding and worrying about falling! It has to get over soon!!!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Glad someone else is fed up too - thanks, Brooke
Comment from Johnny Carwash
It's never-ending, isn't it? Just when it starts to melt, there's another storm and another five to ten inches. It's maddening... and your poem does a great job capturing that feeling. ;-)
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It's never-ending, isn't it? Just when it starts to melt, there's another storm and another five to ten inches. It's maddening... and your poem does a great job capturing that feeling. ;-)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
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Johnny - that pretty much sums it up!! thanks, Brooke
