I Float On Your Tide...
Interdependent, I have become!113 total reviews
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Good write, Mike! It's great to hear a man (or read) saying that his lady's happiness affects his. Women love it when their men write for them and this is lovely!
Pea
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Good write, Mike! It's great to hear a man (or read) saying that his lady's happiness affects his. Women love it when their men write for them and this is lovely!
Pea
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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I had to chuckle, this is the way that I always have been and if am am able to come up with something, it is deserved. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Though slightly cliched, I like the tone and the lighheartedbess of this poem, especially the last line. The color enhances your message. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Though slightly cliched, I like the tone and the lighheartedbess of this poem, especially the last line. The color enhances your message. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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With such a short poem, though cliche'd I felt that this is the best way to get the meaning to come through. Thank you for your compliments and this reveiw.
Comment from IndianaIrish
Hi Mike! Throw me a bone and I'll follow you anywhere...sounds like love to me LOL
I liked everything about this poem, Sir. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Smiles,
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Hi Mike! Throw me a bone and I'll follow you anywhere...sounds like love to me LOL
I liked everything about this poem, Sir. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Smiles,
Indy :>)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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lol, I'd be careful about wishses. Thank you for the compliments and this review. Mike K2
Comment from skye
I love water poems, love the beauty of nature, and your description of both water and feelings is very good.
Well crafted poem, nice lines, great rhythm, and easy to read aloud.
Your well chosen words describe these feelings so well, making them come alive on the page.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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I love water poems, love the beauty of nature, and your description of both water and feelings is very good.
Well crafted poem, nice lines, great rhythm, and easy to read aloud.
Your well chosen words describe these feelings so well, making them come alive on the page.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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That is the one element that changes the most and has claimed more men. lol Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from ravenshadowwinds
Counting works if the content is good. I just dont like the notion that everything must be counted. In this case the counting worked, it had good metre and it was enjoyable.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Counting works if the content is good. I just dont like the notion that everything must be counted. In this case the counting worked, it had good metre and it was enjoyable.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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I agree, but Judians poem was going through my head all day. I worked this out at work and I saw a certain irony the way things formed. Normally, I'm freestyle. Thankyou for your compliments and this review.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello MikeK2,
This was an enjoyable poem to read. However, I found the following stanza a little bumpy - a small change would help:
When pushed away, I'm vs. When pushed away,
never more alone. vs. I am so alone
When hugged, I'm like a ........ (or ????)
dog given a bone.
I like the catchy rhythm and I love the photo. The last line is
something to ponder for some men, but never a wise man - only a fool. (Smiles)
This was a pleasure to read. Keep writing.
Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Hello MikeK2,
This was an enjoyable poem to read. However, I found the following stanza a little bumpy - a small change would help:
When pushed away, I'm vs. When pushed away,
never more alone. vs. I am so alone
When hugged, I'm like a ........ (or ????)
dog given a bone.
I like the catchy rhythm and I love the photo. The last line is
something to ponder for some men, but never a wise man - only a fool. (Smiles)
This was a pleasure to read. Keep writing.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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With love I have a feeling that both walk hand in hand inside a man. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Nice lilt to the rhyme :)
Liked these lines especially:
When pushed away, I'm
never more alone.
When hugged, I'm like a
dog given a bone. :)
Good job!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Nice lilt to the rhyme :)
Liked these lines especially:
When pushed away, I'm
never more alone.
When hugged, I'm like a
dog given a bone. :)
Good job!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Also for sharing your favorites too.
Comment from BWitch
Simply written, excellently expressed.
To me, a sad reflection of allowing anothers moods to effect your own. (not implicating yourself at all).
As usual, excellent writing from you!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Simply written, excellently expressed.
To me, a sad reflection of allowing anothers moods to effect your own. (not implicating yourself at all).
As usual, excellent writing from you!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Like you women don't have your charms. This to me is the first indicator that I really care for the person and it has affected spiritually. Thank you very much for this review.
Comment from conniet
I thought your piece of poetry was very witty, and well written! Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing! Hugs Connie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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I thought your piece of poetry was very witty, and well written! Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing! Hugs Connie
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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It is my pleasure to share. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from GerryMacNeil
Sounds a little more like co-dependence than interdepence to me, but that is was being love-sick does to a person! I am a little puzzled by the first stanza, because I am not sure what the antecedent of "it" is--parallelism say it should be "head", but for sense, it should be "cloud". Otherwise, this is a clear statement of a love-sick "wise man or fool."
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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Sounds a little more like co-dependence than interdepence to me, but that is was being love-sick does to a person! I am a little puzzled by the first stanza, because I am not sure what the antecedent of "it" is--parallelism say it should be "head", but for sense, it should be "cloud". Otherwise, this is a clear statement of a love-sick "wise man or fool."
Comment Written 22-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2008
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This rubbed me the wrong way at first, but co-dependence would be a good thing. Talking of love isck, click, "all" in my portfolio and head down to the bottom, "That Man Is..." That was written when I thougth I knew what lovesick was about. Thank you for this review. -Probably someone that is in love is most likely both, strangly at the same time... and dependant! lol
