Sink Or Swim Together!
We'll rise or fall together!64 total reviews
Comment from playinaround
Interesting poem... It reminds me of the state of the world right now. It makes me wonder what inspired this poem. The picture is perfect for the words. Goes together so well.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Interesting poem... It reminds me of the state of the world right now. It makes me wonder what inspired this poem. The picture is perfect for the words. Goes together so well.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Playinaround,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from HansiJ
I love the idea behind your poem. I think it can be applied to many other situations. Of course, the current pandemic is one where we should stand together. But for any situation the quote " Together we rise and united we strong is true"
Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I love the idea behind your poem. I think it can be applied to many other situations. Of course, the current pandemic is one where we should stand together. But for any situation the quote " Together we rise and united we strong is true"
Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Hansi J,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck'.
"I think it can be applied to many other situations." Yes, Of course!
With best wishes
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes we are all in this together and let's hope it makes us closer in the fight against this evil virus, I enjoyed your positive words here, always think thrice before going outside and always wear a mask and gloves, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Yes we are all in this together and let's hope it makes us closer in the fight against this evil virus, I enjoyed your positive words here, always think thrice before going outside and always wear a mask and gloves, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Dolly,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from Patty Palmer
Yes, it does seem that states and countries around the world have banded together during this crisis. Sharing what we have with others. And at home here, strangers will go out of their way to help someone. It was like that in 9/11 and I hoped it would stay that way, but it didn't. This has been such a huge crisis, maybe this time it will be different. I hope so!
Patty
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Yes, it does seem that states and countries around the world have banded together during this crisis. Sharing what we have with others. And at home here, strangers will go out of their way to help someone. It was like that in 9/11 and I hoped it would stay that way, but it didn't. This has been such a huge crisis, maybe this time it will be different. I hope so!
Patty
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Patty,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Sink Or Swim Together", is short,succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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"Sink Or Swim Together", is short,succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello The Duchess,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from QC Poet
20 Syllable count compliant with a great message placed into it. The attached photo included with your posting representative of the tree of knowledge in one hand and world in the other very fitting for theme. Think thrice in place of twice really good sticking point.
Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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20 Syllable count compliant with a great message placed into it. The attached photo included with your posting representative of the tree of knowledge in one hand and world in the other very fitting for theme. Think thrice in place of twice really good sticking point.
Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello OCPoet,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck in the contest'.
With best wishes
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Great job in only 20 syllables. These are wise words to live by under our current circumstances. No edits or adjustments are necessary. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Great job in only 20 syllables. These are wise words to live by under our current circumstances. No edits or adjustments are necessary. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Lance Loria,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck in the contest'.
With best wishes
Comment from smileycloud
a very well written and highly motivated poem
the message cannot be faulted as with the title
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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a very well written and highly motivated poem
the message cannot be faulted as with the title
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Smileycloud,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from l.raven
Hi RP, small poem my sweet friend to say so much...has an important message...we can rise to the call...or we can could lose it all...now is the time to come together as a family...time for people to wake up and see...we all have the same Father...no matter how many different ways we worship Him...there is still just One...ask Him...He will help us get through...but we have to stand together...I love your poem sweet guy...and this is the perfect picture...very well written you...love Linda xxoo
remain staying safe...
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi RP, small poem my sweet friend to say so much...has an important message...we can rise to the call...or we can could lose it all...now is the time to come together as a family...time for people to wake up and see...we all have the same Father...no matter how many different ways we worship Him...there is still just One...ask Him...He will help us get through...but we have to stand together...I love your poem sweet guy...and this is the perfect picture...very well written you...love Linda xxoo
remain staying safe...
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello L. Raven,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by Good Wishes and Blessings.
I'm HIGHLY GRATEFUL to you for the SIX STARS which always raise my status as a writer / poet.
With best wishes
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Hi RP, trust me when I say you don't need me in any way, shape, or form to help raise the status of you as a writer/poet...you do an amazing job at that all by yourself...you have a true talent for writing...and I love reading you...and am HIGHLY GRATEFUL to have you as my friend...and you sweet guy are always so welcome...best wishes back at you...love to ya...xxoo
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Hi L. Raven,
Again, THANKS a lot for your so Encouraging and LOVELY words!
Take care.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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soooooooooo welcome you...alwaysssssssss...
sitting here looking out the window on a very gray day...but I have to say...I love rainy days...they smell good...and I love the feel off rain...but I'll wish you a beautiful sunny day...
take care...and best wishes back at you...stay safe...love xxoo
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Hi L. Raven,
I like your Frankness, Truthfulness, and your lovey evergreen words which help me feel myself in a pleasant atmosphere enriched with LAUDABLE POSITIVITY.
Keep this SPIRIT up!
With best wishes,
~ RP
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you soooooo make me smile you...goodnight...sweet dreams...love xxoo
Comment from Steven J Anthony
The world of poetry is very large though with many different creative styles. I love your creativity with clever rhyming in just 20 syllables. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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The world of poetry is very large though with many different creative styles. I love your creativity with clever rhyming in just 20 syllables. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Steven J Anthony,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
