Tomorrow Never Comes
Sweet Mary (I would call her that.) Homeless, I fell in love61 total reviews
Comment from Swampfox1
You are correct that tomorrow never comes. There have been songs written on it and yes, tomorrow never comes. I totally enjoyed it. It is well written, flows very well and this is easy to understand and before one knows it , its finished. Great job, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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You are correct that tomorrow never comes. There have been songs written on it and yes, tomorrow never comes. I totally enjoyed it. It is well written, flows very well and this is easy to understand and before one knows it , its finished. Great job, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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So true... just gone. yours, diana
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Yep, you're welcome.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is so well written. It really would've been nice to have purchased one of Sweet Mary's masterpieces. How ingenious of her to scribble pictures of unicorns.
A missed opportunity, but not a failure in my opinion, but I do understand the regret. But you've immortalized Mary in a beautiful poem.
a most excellent read. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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This is so well written. It really would've been nice to have purchased one of Sweet Mary's masterpieces. How ingenious of her to scribble pictures of unicorns.
A missed opportunity, but not a failure in my opinion, but I do understand the regret. But you've immortalized Mary in a beautiful poem.
a most excellent read. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Gloria... Her unicorn were so precious. I could see she signed them and that let me know she still had a part of her cognizance available to her. Sweet Mary is now given a decent moment. yours, diana
Comment from meeshu
beautifully written, Art. a sad story with a sad ending. brings out many emotions.
good intentions vs. harsh realities. a fine piece of free verse.......meeshu
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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beautifully written, Art. a sad story with a sad ending. brings out many emotions.
good intentions vs. harsh realities. a fine piece of free verse.......meeshu
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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meeshu you are a joy... loved good intentions vs. harsh realities. perfectly summed up. yours, diana
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Yes I have many regrets of waiting too long or after they are gone wishing I had spent more time. I seem not to learn my lesson as I still do this. Time is precious and we want it all to ourselves, but we can make such a difference in someones life by giving it to them. Well said.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Yes I have many regrets of waiting too long or after they are gone wishing I had spent more time. I seem not to learn my lesson as I still do this. Time is precious and we want it all to ourselves, but we can make such a difference in someones life by giving it to them. Well said.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Say Amen Roxanna... It is, for me, so important to make an effort to connect with others. yours, di
Comment from F Scott Hafner
Well done again! I just offered to accompany beer choir with my uke in San Diego on Monday. How to focus the energy of lots of creative types - singers- will be interesting. Seems similar to your poem. Find the opportunity to support other's creativity. More interesting to read your stuff now that I know you a bit more.
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Well done again! I just offered to accompany beer choir with my uke in San Diego on Monday. How to focus the energy of lots of creative types - singers- will be interesting. Seems similar to your poem. Find the opportunity to support other's creativity. More interesting to read your stuff now that I know you a bit more.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hey kiddo love the Beer Choir... what a fun and interest gig. I always encourage other people's creativity... the more the merrier when it comes to creative people. Frank you have once again spoiled for which I'm humbled and grateful... Thank You. Thank You, Thank you! di
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Art: I like how you show you saw a lady on the bench.
Then, you had time to visit her and she was gone. We
need to slow down our time of busy and touch lives.
Who did she have as friends? Where did she eat?
Enjoy. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Art: I like how you show you saw a lady on the bench.
Then, you had time to visit her and she was gone. We
need to slow down our time of busy and touch lives.
Who did she have as friends? Where did she eat?
Enjoy. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hey Flulikean eagle... you got it thanks so much for stopping by, reading and your stellar review.
Comment from janalma
This is so true. We do stuff like that and then regret sets in. I don't know if this is true but it certainly is true to life (and the humans that live it. Ha.) This poem actually brought tears to my eyes. Very good job.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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This is so true. We do stuff like that and then regret sets in. I don't know if this is true but it certainly is true to life (and the humans that live it. Ha.) This poem actually brought tears to my eyes. Very good job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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hey janalma... I'm grateful for this beautiful review. I feel so strongly about connecting with others. thanks so much for you stellar review plus one. I'm honored. yours, diana
Comment from Harry Smith
Exceptionally written is this beautiful poem that has so much imagery and emotions. The reader really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Exceptionally written is this beautiful poem that has so much imagery and emotions. The reader really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hey Harry... I'm humbled by your stellar review
Comment from ameen786
My friend, you penned a wonderful poem with a poignant theme telling a gravitating story that should resonate with many; time does not cooperate; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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My friend, you penned a wonderful poem with a poignant theme telling a gravitating story that should resonate with many; time does not cooperate; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hey ameen... love when you stop by and am honored by your stellar review
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Tomorrow Never Comes', is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. Too late isn't good enough. It was a pleasure to read a review this talented poet's work. This is a six, but I only have fives left.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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"Tomorrow Never Comes', is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. Too late isn't good enough. It was a pleasure to read a review this talented poet's work. This is a six, but I only have fives left.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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thanks so much duchess... i'm honored and grateful for your stellar review. yours, diana
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diana, as always you're very welcome.
Take care and God bless you,
the Duchess
