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A Lion in the Hallway

A recollection of a visit by an uncle and aunt

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Comment from Sergeant Floyd
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Very realistic description of a Texas country farm. I found the children's imaginative
actions appealing, charming and whimsical. I loved the part that the dress material resembled flour sacks. People were poor then but not in spirit or practicality. Best of luck with your book. I hope your grandchildren can see the buried treasure it holds.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Lakieshae
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wow, you took me back home to Louisiana back in the 60's in the beginning. then it got a bit tense, then the ray of sunshine of realizing the first time hearing snoring... laughing out loud at the ending. nice write

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    I thought you might like this one. Thank you.