Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This Monorhyme writing prompt entry fulfills the components of the contest with fun and humor. I liked the domino effect of one creature's actions leading to another. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn


This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Nice rhyming in this competition piece, although I think the rhythm falls off slightly in places but it was an enjoyable read nevertheless.

All the best
GMG

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017