The Quest
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Comment from Sasha
Excellent work with this. Your father's reaction is understandable, especially knowing he has a son--creating an awkward situation. I like his suggestions and do hope you continue to communicate and at some point, will be able to meet your father.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Excellent work with this. Your father's reaction is understandable, especially knowing he has a son--creating an awkward situation. I like his suggestions and do hope you continue to communicate and at some point, will be able to meet your father.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Hi Sasha, yeah I understood him as well. It was an exciting time though. Thanks for your great review. Hope your slow mending is continuing. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from royowen
These are salient points, the fact that you have a half brother is also amazing. Getting in touch with a long lost father would not have been easy, either for you or your father, and his reaction is understanble,
I have a long lost son somewhere in the world, but may never hear from him, and I don't think he's aware of me, my wife and daughters dint know, and I don't see the point in telling them, so it wouldn't be good for me if he suddenly manifested, he would be in his forties now, but I wouldn't reject him, like your father, well done, Ulla, blessings, Roy
Typo : I promise (I'll) make it short. 2: there was far to(o) much information
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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These are salient points, the fact that you have a half brother is also amazing. Getting in touch with a long lost father would not have been easy, either for you or your father, and his reaction is understanble,
I have a long lost son somewhere in the world, but may never hear from him, and I don't think he's aware of me, my wife and daughters dint know, and I don't see the point in telling them, so it wouldn't be good for me if he suddenly manifested, he would be in his forties now, but I wouldn't reject him, like your father, well done, Ulla, blessings, Roy
Typo : I promise (I'll) make it short. 2: there was far to(o) much information
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Thanks a lot for this great revie,Roy. I can only apology for this extremely late answer. I'm sorry. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thank you so much for sharing." The quest". His both a heart warming and heart wrenching story that you share. Your reader gets a sense of the emotion that you went through, but nobody lives it like you have. You are showing your vulnerability to a wide audience and that takes courage. Your flow is very good and you keep our interest from the very beginning to the final realization. Congratulations you have a brother! Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for sharing." The quest". His both a heart warming and heart wrenching story that you share. Your reader gets a sense of the emotion that you went through, but nobody lives it like you have. You are showing your vulnerability to a wide audience and that takes courage. Your flow is very good and you keep our interest from the very beginning to the final realization. Congratulations you have a brother! Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for this heartfelt review and the lovely stars. I so appreciate it. It has been great to share my story of finding the family I never had. But more is to follow it is not quite finished yet. Thanks again. All the best. Ulla
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Douglas Paul
Well done as usual Ulla, Your writing is always fluid and clear and I see no errors. I think you increased the mystery nicely with the introduction of the brother
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Well done as usual Ulla, Your writing is always fluid and clear and I see no errors. I think you increased the mystery nicely with the introduction of the brother
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for this great review. I'm so pleased that you like it. All the best. Ulla
Comment from robyn corum
Ulla,
Wow. I can't imagine how emotional that must have been for you! But you handled it all superbly - as you have with this posting. *smile*
A few notes, if I may?
1.) I motioned for Alan to come and sit next to me, (patting) the seat, not
2.) I promise I('ll) make it short. It's time we got something to eat.
3.) Mum had (indeed) been waiting to hear from me, and
4.) There was far (too) much information that nobody else could possibly
5.) suggesting and we write to each other. That'll be great. (remove space)"
Thanks for sharing - none of these nits were enough to make me lower the rating. Congrats!
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Ulla,
Wow. I can't imagine how emotional that must have been for you! But you handled it all superbly - as you have with this posting. *smile*
A few notes, if I may?
1.) I motioned for Alan to come and sit next to me, (patting) the seat, not
2.) I promise I('ll) make it short. It's time we got something to eat.
3.) Mum had (indeed) been waiting to hear from me, and
4.) There was far (too) much information that nobody else could possibly
5.) suggesting and we write to each other. That'll be great. (remove space)"
Thanks for sharing - none of these nits were enough to make me lower the rating. Congrats!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Hi Robyn, sorry, I'm a bit late in answering, but I appreciate your helpful review and corrected the minute I saw it 2 days ago. All the best. Ulla:)))
