Though I'm not perfect...
I can choose a virtue.73 total reviews
Comment from Jacq77
I gave this a six because I think it deserves every one of the stars. Your words are so well-chosen, flow beautifully, and give a new insight to 1 Corinthians 13:13 - one of my favourite chapters in the Bible. I actually got goosebumps when I read this. I loved it, and the artwork was a perfect choice. This poem deserves first place in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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I gave this a six because I think it deserves every one of the stars. Your words are so well-chosen, flow beautifully, and give a new insight to 1 Corinthians 13:13 - one of my favourite chapters in the Bible. I actually got goosebumps when I read this. I loved it, and the artwork was a perfect choice. This poem deserves first place in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks dear friend for the outstanding review, comments and wonderful stars.
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi ...
I couldn't agree with you more. Love can mend many fences and open new opportunities for personal growth and satisfaction in life.
Very nicely done! I smiled all the way through this ... it made me feel "warm and comfy"! Thank you!
Wishing you the best of luck in the contest ...
Alan
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Hi ...
I couldn't agree with you more. Love can mend many fences and open new opportunities for personal growth and satisfaction in life.
Very nicely done! I smiled all the way through this ... it made me feel "warm and comfy"! Thank you!
Wishing you the best of luck in the contest ...
Alan
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks Alan, for wonderful review and comments,
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My Pleasure!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent testament to faith, author. It's not easy to admit one isn't perfect, even though it seems the politically correct thing to do these days. It's better to ask for forgiveness than to ask for permission.
Strong meter and rhymes, and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Excellent testament to faith, author. It's not easy to admit one isn't perfect, even though it seems the politically correct thing to do these days. It's better to ask for forgiveness than to ask for permission.
Strong meter and rhymes, and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks Gloria, for the great review and comments,
Comment from DragonSkulls
What an beautiful and uplifting piece you have entered here, poet. The final line wraps it up perfectly. You chose an excellent picture to go with it as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Great write.
DS
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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What an beautiful and uplifting piece you have entered here, poet. The final line wraps it up perfectly. You chose an excellent picture to go with it as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Great write.
DS
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks DS for the wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Dawny53
What a beautiful and strong poem.. I commend you on it.. very well done, very moving and heartwarming as well.. good luck to you in this contest.. it's a fine entry!
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What a beautiful and strong poem.. I commend you on it.. very well done, very moving and heartwarming as well.. good luck to you in this contest.. it's a fine entry!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks Dawn, for this great review and comments, and the well wishes
Comment from MissMerri
I love this poem. It is obviously written by someone who knows where to find all three virtues, and also someone who knows how to write a perfectly metered and rhymed poem. Thank you for sharing this. I certainly enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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I love this poem. It is obviously written by someone who knows where to find all three virtues, and also someone who knows how to write a perfectly metered and rhymed poem. Thank you for sharing this. I certainly enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks Adonna, surely I'm not that transparent, great review, thanks,
Comment from Alan K Pease
I think your choice reflects my own. Love is certainly a fine state of affairs that can be drawn upon to repair obstacles that come into our path. Beautiful poetry simply said.
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I think your choice reflects my own. Love is certainly a fine state of affairs that can be drawn upon to repair obstacles that come into our path. Beautiful poetry simply said.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks Alan, for the fantastic review, comments and exceptional rating,
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
_ Indeed, faith can rebuild a broken wall.
_ This is a beautifully penned and presented entry.
_ Good luck in the contest.
* Happy Thanksgiving & Merry Christmas *
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Hi,
_ Indeed, faith can rebuild a broken wall.
_ This is a beautifully penned and presented entry.
_ Good luck in the contest.
* Happy Thanksgiving & Merry Christmas *
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks Jackie for the wonderful review and words
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine poem for the contest
I'm a little surprised that Corinthians
says love is greater than faith
All three are great
Some might say faith and love are synonyms
But the sum is greater when all three combine
Well done
With an excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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This is a very fine poem for the contest
I'm a little surprised that Corinthians
says love is greater than faith
All three are great
Some might say faith and love are synonyms
But the sum is greater when all three combine
Well done
With an excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the great review and comments,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Interesting artwork.
-Thank you for the author notes.
-Very nicely written poem.
-I like how you take each virtue stanza by stanza building to the last one.
-Good use of rhyme as well as description.
-I like the beginning,
"If virtue could supplant my faults
just which one would I choose"
-Excellent conclusion:
"for love and hope combined with faith,
rebuilds a broken wall."
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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-Interesting artwork.
-Thank you for the author notes.
-Very nicely written poem.
-I like how you take each virtue stanza by stanza building to the last one.
-Good use of rhyme as well as description.
-I like the beginning,
"If virtue could supplant my faults
just which one would I choose"
-Excellent conclusion:
"for love and hope combined with faith,
rebuilds a broken wall."
Comment Written 23-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the lovely review and words
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You are welcome.
