Miranda the Merry
a story poem in rhyming couplets129 total reviews
Comment from Zinnia48
This was such a fun, magical poem. I have always loved fairy tales, and am glad to add this to my repertoire. The idea of turning sunbeams into snowflakes is enchanting. As always I enjoy your gift of rhythm and rhyme. Caroline
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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This was such a fun, magical poem. I have always loved fairy tales, and am glad to add this to my repertoire. The idea of turning sunbeams into snowflakes is enchanting. As always I enjoy your gift of rhythm and rhyme. Caroline
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Caroline, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Martin Chan
"Miranda the merry" is a wonderfully written story poem in rhyming couplets format.
The story has an interesting theme and has a good presentation. Composed with good choice of words and has a smooth flow to read.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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"Miranda the merry" is a wonderfully written story poem in rhyming couplets format.
The story has an interesting theme and has a good presentation. Composed with good choice of words and has a smooth flow to read.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Martin, thank you so very much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, aside from your usual fabulous imagery, rhyme and metering, this story-poem gives new meaning to the word muse and creating a new fairy tale that could easily live through centuries. :)
(Welcome back!)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Well, aside from your usual fabulous imagery, rhyme and metering, this story-poem gives new meaning to the word muse and creating a new fairy tale that could easily live through centuries. :)
(Welcome back!)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Thank you so very much, my gracious and generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from mikemagine
Magnificent poem! Very enchanting and beautiful. Your poetic talent always blows me away, Brooke:-) Great rhyming, great word pictures. I also love the picture and the colors you used to enhance this wonderful piece!
Mike
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Magnificent poem! Very enchanting and beautiful. Your poetic talent always blows me away, Brooke:-) Great rhyming, great word pictures. I also love the picture and the colors you used to enhance this wonderful piece!
Mike
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Mike, thank you so very much for your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke
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Sure thing, Brooke:-)
Mike
Comment from daeneam
Wow! What a warm and cheerful poem for your daughter. I love it! It's very apt for this holiday season. Very creative and full of love! HAPPY HOLIDAYS to you and to all your loved ones! CHEERS c", Mae
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Wow! What a warm and cheerful poem for your daughter. I love it! It's very apt for this holiday season. Very creative and full of love! HAPPY HOLIDAYS to you and to all your loved ones! CHEERS c", Mae
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Mae, thank you so much for your generous and thoughtful review. Happy Holidays to you too :-) Brooke
Comment from pattipac
Such a lovely poem to share, as the grip of winter takes hold of most of our country. Excellent theme, word choice, and rhyme make your poem outstanding.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Such a lovely poem to share, as the grip of winter takes hold of most of our country. Excellent theme, word choice, and rhyme make your poem outstanding.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Patti, thank you so very much :-) I truly appreciate your generosity. Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
E$xcellent. Welcome back. We have missed you word gems. This one was absolutely beautiful . It must have been cold when you went on your trip.Sounds like she brightened things up for you. Great job!
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E$xcellent. Welcome back. We have missed you word gems. This one was absolutely beautiful . It must have been cold when you went on your trip.Sounds like she brightened things up for you. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Charlotte, thank you so very much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from nor84
Your children's poems always bring out the little girl in this old body, Brooke. I hope you're putting them in a children's book so they can be enjoyed by little kids everywhere. You're a modern Mother Goose!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Your children's poems always bring out the little girl in this old body, Brooke. I hope you're putting them in a children's book so they can be enjoyed by little kids everywhere. You're a modern Mother Goose!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Nor, thank you so much, my generous and encouraging friend :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
Ah, Brooke, what a lovely story in poem form. It reads so easily, with perfect rhythm. this surely would make a lovely children's book. It deserves the All time best award for sure. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Ah, Brooke, what a lovely story in poem form. It reads so easily, with perfect rhythm. this surely would make a lovely children's book. It deserves the All time best award for sure. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so very much for your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke
Comment from dragonpoet
Very well written fable of a fairy that made good out of bad and gave all hope that the worst problems could be solved when they were weaved with love and hope.
Very good rhyme and even meter.
I like the artwork.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Very well written fable of a fairy that made good out of bad and gave all hope that the worst problems could be solved when they were weaved with love and hope.
Very good rhyme and even meter.
I like the artwork.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Joan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so very welcome, Brooke.
Joan
