If Love Be Flowers
rhyming quatrains in 8/7/8/7156 total reviews
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Dad said, "take you hands off Chloe." Nora is not talking! A lovely verse that flows with the mind as you present one picture after another in the mind of the reader. Lovely. A very enjoyable
verse. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Dad said, "take you hands off Chloe." Nora is not talking! A lovely verse that flows with the mind as you present one picture after another in the mind of the reader. Lovely. A very enjoyable
verse. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Robin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley B
Oh Brooke this poem is just adorable. Your rhyming lines are always perfect. Sawyer and Chloe are precious. Thank you for sharing them with us. Great job, Shirley
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Oh Brooke this poem is just adorable. Your rhyming lines are always perfect. Sawyer and Chloe are precious. Thank you for sharing them with us. Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Shirley, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tfawcus
A whimsical and delightful profession of a love beyond measure. Sometimes I think that the depth of love is best expressed in the infinite beauty of a single perfect bloom, but the profusion you suggest certainly expresses the limitless bubbling over of joy and excess that is love in its first flush!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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A whimsical and delightful profession of a love beyond measure. Sometimes I think that the depth of love is best expressed in the infinite beauty of a single perfect bloom, but the profusion you suggest certainly expresses the limitless bubbling over of joy and excess that is love in its first flush!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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tfawcus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from bard owl
What a lovely poem written in honor of your grandson and his Chloe. There can never be too many ways to express love and flowers are one of the very best representations of fondness. The rhyming and flow of this poem are flawless and the imagery was filled with happiness. Excellent. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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What a lovely poem written in honor of your grandson and his Chloe. There can never be too many ways to express love and flowers are one of the very best representations of fondness. The rhyming and flow of this poem are flawless and the imagery was filled with happiness. Excellent. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from McMurry903
This is so sweetly romantic, Brooke! I love the perfect rhyme and meter as always. The tender message is very touching. I also love the photo of Sawyer and Chloe it's great to see a boy and girl playing so well together at that age. It's really good for both of them. Great job!
Brian
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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This is so sweetly romantic, Brooke! I love the perfect rhyme and meter as always. The tender message is very touching. I also love the photo of Sawyer and Chloe it's great to see a boy and girl playing so well together at that age. It's really good for both of them. Great job!
Brian
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Brian, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Ah, young love. I recently came across a study which suggests that the most successful marriages are ones where the partners have known one another continuously from childhood. Perhaps this will be one of them ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Ah, young love. I recently came across a study which suggests that the most successful marriages are ones where the partners have known one another continuously from childhood. Perhaps this will be one of them ...
Patrick
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
Great picture. I admit flowers isn't enough to show true affection, but still a nice token of that love. Nice rhyming, in that it's not your usual rhymes. A superb quatrain. Les
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Great picture. I admit flowers isn't enough to show true affection, but still a nice token of that love. Nice rhyming, in that it's not your usual rhymes. A superb quatrain. Les
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
Comment from lappmellott
Another great job on the poem and Sawyer and his friend are both adorable. Sometimes a body finds themselves just sitting and pondering the question "What it". What would have happened if I'd done this or if I'd done that.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Another great job on the poem and Sawyer and his friend are both adorable. Sometimes a body finds themselves just sitting and pondering the question "What it". What would have happened if I'd done this or if I'd done that.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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lappmellott, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome.
Comment from evilynne
Love and flowers, what a great theme! As always, your poetry is worded perfectly, giving a perfect picture of flowers, love, et al.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Love and flowers, what a great theme! As always, your poetry is worded perfectly, giving a perfect picture of flowers, love, et al.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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evi, thank you so much for your generous and encouraging review :-) Brooke
Comment from Linda England Bonam
You write so beautifully, Brooke. I would love to have your talent! The picture is adorable! I loved 'I'd need at least a field to fill, with overflowing flowers....'that was my favorite stanza.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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You write so beautifully, Brooke. I would love to have your talent! The picture is adorable! I loved 'I'd need at least a field to fill, with overflowing flowers....'that was my favorite stanza.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
