You Are Being Watched
Happy living Protect and keep safe 202 words A Non-Fiction122 total reviews
Comment from Charade
This is a very different approach; I'm very curious what inspired you.
I understand where you're coming from and I applaud those who are vigilant, however I have to say if there's a will (on the bad people's part) there's a way. Is there a safe no one can crack? Is there a computer no one can hack? Is there a person no attacker can overcome? Is there house no intruder can penetrate?
I say this not to argue with you, but since nothing is full proof, would you add another paragraph or two about ideas to make each of us, our loved ones, and our things off the radar of cruel people?
By the way, 'jewellery' should be 'jewelry'.
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This is a very different approach; I'm very curious what inspired you.
I understand where you're coming from and I applaud those who are vigilant, however I have to say if there's a will (on the bad people's part) there's a way. Is there a safe no one can crack? Is there a computer no one can hack? Is there a person no attacker can overcome? Is there house no intruder can penetrate?
I say this not to argue with you, but since nothing is full proof, would you add another paragraph or two about ideas to make each of us, our loved ones, and our things off the radar of cruel people?
By the way, 'jewellery' should be 'jewelry'.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from justmarly
You can't see, forecast or predict the future. You never know or no one tells you who will be cheated, molested, teased, adulterated, raped, kidnapped, hijacked, missing or murdered next or what will be lost, destroyed, stolen, robbed, looted or snatched how, by whom, when and where.
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You can't see, forecast or predict the future. You never know or no one tells you who will be cheated, molested, teased, adulterated, raped, kidnapped, hijacked, missing or murdered next or what will be lost, destroyed, stolen, robbed, looted or snatched how, by whom, when and where.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Darkhorse555
its the crazy world we live in we never know when that something will knock at the door some violent acts noted you never know
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its the crazy world we live in we never know when that something will knock at the door some violent acts noted you never know
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from kelly frederick
You conveyed paranoia. Hope you intended that. Moreover the need to take it upon ourselves for safety and security is solely responsible to one such as self. Not knowing the future is no longer an excuse we have been warned.
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You conveyed paranoia. Hope you intended that. Moreover the need to take it upon ourselves for safety and security is solely responsible to one such as self. Not knowing the future is no longer an excuse we have been warned.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from david bell
We are so worried about stuff. The only things I worry about, is having my dreams and hopes stolen. True love can't be stolen. I love your piece.
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We are so worried about stuff. The only things I worry about, is having my dreams and hopes stolen. True love can't be stolen. I love your piece.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Great piece. I love your style and readability.Flawless mechanics and no spag issues. Such a wonderful message in all your work, very upbeat and positive.I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Great piece. I love your style and readability.Flawless mechanics and no spag issues. Such a wonderful message in all your work, very upbeat and positive.I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from Jose Saic
Is an interesting writing that gives us advices about how to behave in our life.
To be alert, and not neglect anything and any body.
It gives an alert to us that sometimes are inside of our mind thinking only in our own problems but neglecting that we are watched continuosly,keeping account of your living for violating your right to living.
This writing make a warning to us, to concern about our protection (family, and material things)
I like it, and thanks to the author for his advices.
Congratulations.
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Is an interesting writing that gives us advices about how to behave in our life.
To be alert, and not neglect anything and any body.
It gives an alert to us that sometimes are inside of our mind thinking only in our own problems but neglecting that we are watched continuosly,keeping account of your living for violating your right to living.
This writing make a warning to us, to concern about our protection (family, and material things)
I like it, and thanks to the author for his advices.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from BeckyW
You have a decent message here, but some of your words and phrases are redundant. You spelled jewelry incorrectly, unless there's another way to spell it that I don't know of (perhaps another language). This happens, so please don't take offence to my spelling comment. Just want to help:) Your message I think is based on 'fear' and 'distrust' however I do agree that we should all be precautionary, but relaxed and making more of an effort to see the good and to do what is needed to change things to the better.
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You have a decent message here, but some of your words and phrases are redundant. You spelled jewelry incorrectly, unless there's another way to spell it that I don't know of (perhaps another language). This happens, so please don't take offence to my spelling comment. Just want to help:) Your message I think is based on 'fear' and 'distrust' however I do agree that we should all be precautionary, but relaxed and making more of an effort to see the good and to do what is needed to change things to the better.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from lindalcreel
You always have such meaning behind your posts. It's true, we live in an age where there are very few secrets. I'm a fan of technology, but sometimes, I think we take it too far. My granddaughter found out her mother had breast cancer on Facebook. All's well now, but it was a horrible experience. Thanks again for sharing.
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You always have such meaning behind your posts. It's true, we live in an age where there are very few secrets. I'm a fan of technology, but sometimes, I think we take it too far. My granddaughter found out her mother had breast cancer on Facebook. All's well now, but it was a horrible experience. Thanks again for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a very thought-provoking post. Big Brother is watching is a motto from George Orwells' 1984. This is a very powerful thought. George Orwell was a visionary, because his writing is as relevant today as it ever was.
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This is a very thought-provoking post. Big Brother is watching is a motto from George Orwells' 1984. This is a very powerful thought. George Orwell was a visionary, because his writing is as relevant today as it ever was.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
