Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from Norbanus
That ear should be enough to get his attention, but it doesn't tell him if the visiter is still arond.
OUtstanding bit of tension as the janitor discovers the lights, the trashbag and finally the ear.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
That ear should be enough to get his attention, but it doesn't tell him if the visiter is still arond.
OUtstanding bit of tension as the janitor discovers the lights, the trashbag and finally the ear.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Hi, Norbanus. Thank you for your generous and encouraging review. I always enjoy your insights! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Rondeno
Excellent story, with some Indian cultural angles, which is interesting. I adore the suppressed love triangle among the cops. Just one thing: we "rein in" our lust (some of us, anyhow): we don't "reign" it in.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
Excellent story, with some Indian cultural angles, which is interesting. I adore the suppressed love triangle among the cops. Just one thing: we "rein in" our lust (some of us, anyhow): we don't "reign" it in.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Hi, Michael. Thank you much for reading my chapter. I really appreciate your insights and suggestion for correction. Always get those two mixed up! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from God's Writer
A great story sis. Full of unexpected turns. Very well written and presented. I love the internal twisting of this beautifully written piece. Thank you
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
A great story sis. Full of unexpected turns. Very well written and presented. I love the internal twisting of this beautifully written piece. Thank you
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Hi, Erick. Thanks for being the first to review! And I very much appreciate your kind words and generous support. Warmest regards, Bev
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You're welcome.