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Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Brooke...such a lovely tribute to the violet. I like the word 'verdant' but don't see it used too often...it is very descriptive here. For only three lines your imagery is wonderful....well done....blessings....chey

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    I love the word "verdant" - thanks for noticing it :-) Chey, glad you liked this one - your visits are always appreciated. Brooke :-)
Comment from Begin Again
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Brooke...

These lovely flowers grew wild in the fields on either side of the creek when I was growing up. We would make paper baskets and put the violets in them, leaving them on the neighbor's door.

Thanks for the memory! Carol C

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    More great memories - that thrills me that I tapped into them :-) Thanks for telling me, Carol Brooke :-)
Comment from Annelisa
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Another lovely addition to your series. This is a lovely haiku that you have formatted so well. The art work is dazzling! Viva haiku
Annelisa

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Thank you, Annelisa - I love the art, too - FanArt is such a great resource :-) Brooke
Comment from MsRefusenik
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Viva violets indeed! One of my favorites because of their vibrant color. Again, as always, a photo that pops off the page and lives up to your gorgeous haiku. It must be wonderful to create this kind of first-class art each day. I envy you.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2009
    Thank you, Maryellen - this review just got buried under newer ones - sorry for the delay on being courteous :-) Brooke
Comment from filmoreodragon
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No tienes que traducir para la profesora:-) You don't have to translate for the teacher heh, heh. I loved the last line. I imagine I am prejudiced toward my second beloved language. Excellent work again.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Good evening and thank you!! You're a delight. Brooke :-)
Comment from skye
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verdant meadowlands
play host to vibrant purples
viva violets
-- Really nice play on the v sounds and use of wonderfully descriptive words in this haiku.
Very well done.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Skye, thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it :-) Brooke
Comment from Jazh
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I love this one, Brooke - purple is my very favourite colour. It is a neat little haiku, flowing well, and painting a clear picture of the subject. I especially like "vibrant purples/viva violets". Beautiful. :)

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Adele, thank you - it is one of my favorite colors too! Glad you also like the alliteration :-) Brooke
Comment from redrider6612
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Violets are my favorite flower, mainly because purple is my favorite color. You've done this lovely flower credit with this wonderfully constructed haiku. I loved all of the 'v' words you used. Viva violets indeed. Thank you for sharing.

Hugs,
Diane

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Diane, thank you! Purple is one gorgeous color - glad you like the alliteration, too :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
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A world in a purple haze
of beauty with violets
sending aromas of sweetness
across the land in this
beautiful hue that can only
have been painted by Mother
Nature.
As always, well done

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Thank you - your comments are always so gracious and lovely. Brooke :-)
Comment from Amicus
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purple poetry
Brooke paints vivid word portraits
viva the haiku

Very good poem. I enjoyed the little read and the violet visions it evokes.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
    Thanks, my friend - hope you've had a lovely day :-) Brooke