The Hummingbird
a reflective septolet90 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great job with the poetry absolutely loved reading it. Excellent job with the poetry it was an absolute joy to read. Spectacular job with everything in general.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Great job with the poetry absolutely loved reading it. Excellent job with the poetry it was an absolute joy to read. Spectacular job with everything in general.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Thank you for this most enthusiastic response! Brooke
Comment from babylonia
brooke,
they are both beautiful. the sweet sound of the hummingbird as it flitters in the air. beautiful. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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brooke,
they are both beautiful. the sweet sound of the hummingbird as it flitters in the air. beautiful. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Barbara, thank you so much. I appreciate your comments, as always. Brooke :-)
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brooke,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from Mischief's Momma
I am named after that plant too :) Except my parents went with Sharon Rose because they thought it flowed better than Rose Sharon. My parents took it from the Song of Solomon.
Israelis have told my husband that now they consider this a weed though.
I love hummingbirds, we see them from time to time here.
Great job on the poem Brooke.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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I am named after that plant too :) Except my parents went with Sharon Rose because they thought it flowed better than Rose Sharon. My parents took it from the Song of Solomon.
Israelis have told my husband that now they consider this a weed though.
I love hummingbirds, we see them from time to time here.
Great job on the poem Brooke.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Sharon, Well, that is just neat :-) Thanks for sharing with me and thanks for the review. Brooke :-)
Comment from Jazh
Anything purple is good in my book! I loved this poem, and I could visualise the hummingbird. Amongst all of her owls, my Nan had a little gold hummingbird which clipped onto curtains, lampshades, etc. Cheers. :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Anything purple is good in my book! I loved this poem, and I could visualise the hummingbird. Amongst all of her owls, my Nan had a little gold hummingbird which clipped onto curtains, lampshades, etc. Cheers. :)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Adele, since I just read your talisman story yesterday, that made me smile :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from mstad55
Once again, I am forced to take notes. A lesson along with a poem, is like going to English class. I like humming birds they are probably the most fun bird to watch fly and feed. I always enjoyed the times going to the bird house at the zoo and watch the humming birds. It reminds me of the time Melvin went and started humming a new song about the little birds he saw in flight. hmmm hmmm hmmm. you can sing along to the rest of it if you like. Mike
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Once again, I am forced to take notes. A lesson along with a poem, is like going to English class. I like humming birds they are probably the most fun bird to watch fly and feed. I always enjoyed the times going to the bird house at the zoo and watch the humming birds. It reminds me of the time Melvin went and started humming a new song about the little birds he saw in flight. hmmm hmmm hmmm. you can sing along to the rest of it if you like. Mike
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Oh, I am singing already, Mike :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from enjoi
Considering the constraints of the format, and the imagery you used, I'd say this poem succeeds in your attempt, managing what you were striving for. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Considering the constraints of the format, and the imagery you used, I'd say this poem succeeds in your attempt, managing what you were striving for. Good stuff.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Thank you- I love the septolet form. Brooke :-)
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke...
This is a
wonderful
septolet.
The colors
are beautiful
and eye catching.
Don't know
how you found
this picture
but it is
stunning and
perfect for
this well
written poem. Blessings...chey
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Hi Brooke...
This is a
wonderful
septolet.
The colors
are beautiful
and eye catching.
Don't know
how you found
this picture
but it is
stunning and
perfect for
this well
written poem. Blessings...chey
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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It was just under hummingbird in fan art. Thanks so much, Chey :-) Brooke
Comment from Lynn27
Hello,
What a cool picture for this great poem. Your words captured the heart of pic. I did enhoyed reading this piece,
Excellent,
Lynn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Hello,
What a cool picture for this great poem. Your words captured the heart of pic. I did enhoyed reading this piece,
Excellent,
Lynn
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Lynn, thank you - isn't a great picture?? Brooke
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Oh yes, it is.
Comment from boberto
Hi, Brooke. Nice verse--beautiful artwork. I have had Althea trees (Rose of Sharon) almost every where I have lived in the states. Presently, have four of them.
Have you read my verse, "Hummingbird Love?"
Have one posted now, I think you would enjoy.
Take care.
Rob
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Hi, Brooke. Nice verse--beautiful artwork. I have had Althea trees (Rose of Sharon) almost every where I have lived in the states. Presently, have four of them.
Have you read my verse, "Hummingbird Love?"
Have one posted now, I think you would enjoy.
Take care.
Rob
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Rob, I can't remember titles - have no idea if I've read your hummingbird poem but will head for your portfolio in a second! :-) Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from jkhudson
Very nice poem in tribute to the hummiongbird. I really like the watercolor picture you used. I also loved the fact that your poem expresses God's design. Nicely done!~:O)Jules
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Very nice poem in tribute to the hummiongbird. I really like the watercolor picture you used. I also loved the fact that your poem expresses God's design. Nicely done!~:O)Jules
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Jules, yeah, it's one great picture. Thanks so much :-) Brooke
