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Quatrains about the Countryside in Bloom143 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Brooke,
Ah, a lovely verse you have penned as you went along. This has superb flow and the scent of flowers carries one down your poetic path. If I had another six it would be yours.
How do you get so many people to review your writings? The most for me is just over a hundred.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Dear Brooke,
Ah, a lovely verse you have penned as you went along. This has superb flow and the scent of flowers carries one down your poetic path. If I had another six it would be yours.
How do you get so many people to review your writings? The most for me is just over a hundred.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Winslow, I have way over 100 people on my fan last, so lots of them review, and I return reviews - if someone reviews me because they saw a banner ad or whatever, even if I never heard of them before, I do a courtesy review - and often that turns someone into a regular reviewer or at least someone who reviews me every time they have a new post up because they know I'll review it after they review me. It's a case of courtesy actually paying off. And I review them even if they only pay 2 cents. The first thing I'll do after I finish this response is go to your portfolio to see if you have anything new posted. I also use banner ads whenever I have earned them - I almost always get hits off them. Thank you for your thoughtful review :) Brooke
Comment from redrider6612
Beautiful! You chose a gorgeous piece of artwork from my favorite fanart artist to accent this lovely poem. I loved the sing-song flow of the lines, the rhymes were natural, the imagery was sweet. I especially enjoyed the cute way you played with the words, giving it a playful air. If you aren't published, you should be! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Beautiful! You chose a gorgeous piece of artwork from my favorite fanart artist to accent this lovely poem. I loved the sing-song flow of the lines, the rhymes were natural, the imagery was sweet. I especially enjoyed the cute way you played with the words, giving it a playful air. If you aren't published, you should be! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Yes, her art is quite beautiful - thank you so much for this most generous and warm review!!! Brooke
Comment from Sardinesandsucker
Hello Brooke,
What can I say? I am there walking on that path, resting in that meadow. I saw a picture of my mother sitting in a field of yellow flowers. I was so touched by this picture that I wrote a story to go with it. Anyway, lovely lovely poem.
Peace and enlightenment
Sandina
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Hello Brooke,
What can I say? I am there walking on that path, resting in that meadow. I saw a picture of my mother sitting in a field of yellow flowers. I was so touched by this picture that I wrote a story to go with it. Anyway, lovely lovely poem.
Peace and enlightenment
Sandina
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much - I am honored by your warm and encouraging comments and your exceptionally generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
Nice. You maintained a strong flow here and I loved the presentation. It read with professionalism and for that you earned the rating. Superb!
The Rivaling Mimic
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Nice. You maintained a strong flow here and I loved the presentation. It read with professionalism and for that you earned the rating. Superb!
The Rivaling Mimic
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. Brooke
Comment from skye
I want to come on that path.... it is so lovely, makes me feel peaceful just reading about it.
Your rhymes are strong, your words are beautiful, and the image of that walk, on that day, memorable.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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I want to come on that path.... it is so lovely, makes me feel peaceful just reading about it.
Your rhymes are strong, your words are beautiful, and the image of that walk, on that day, memorable.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Skye, thank you for your thoughtful comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from QuietMtnSunrise
Excellente! My mom would love this poem and I'm going to recommend she reads it. She loves flowers and sewing and she would definitely relate to the imagery and emotion of this. I really liked the line, "May apples nodded modestly..." Great personification! =)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Excellente! My mom would love this poem and I'm going to recommend she reads it. She loves flowers and sewing and she would definitely relate to the imagery and emotion of this. I really liked the line, "May apples nodded modestly..." Great personification! =)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Telling me your mother would like it is a wonderful compliment - I do hope she does like it :-) Thanks ever so much, Brooke :-) Brooke
Comment from jkhudson
This poem took my breath away! iF I interpreted it correctly this was a path to peace taken by a person dying. I especially loved this verse:
I rested for a little while,
enjoying time alone,
then drawn by need for human warmth,
I asked for guidance home.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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This poem took my breath away! iF I interpreted it correctly this was a path to peace taken by a person dying. I especially loved this verse:
I rested for a little while,
enjoying time alone,
then drawn by need for human warmth,
I asked for guidance home.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Your interpretation is a most interesting one - not what I had in mind, but that's the great thing about poetry - things the poet never thought of are just as fascinating as their original intentions :-) thank you! Brooke
Comment from amada
I like the rhyming in this piece the most. Because, for me, this is a very difficult thing for me to do. It gives a special entonnation to this great poem .
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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I like the rhyming in this piece the most. Because, for me, this is a very difficult thing for me to do. It gives a special entonnation to this great poem .
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Hi. Thank you for your kind remarks - could you please tell me what you think needs changing/work since you gave it a 4?
Brooke
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke...this is a beautiful poem and one I enjoyed reading more than once. Your word choices are delicious and the imagery is stunning. Very well done....blessings....chey
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Hi Brooke...this is a beautiful poem and one I enjoyed reading more than once. Your word choices are delicious and the imagery is stunning. Very well done....blessings....chey
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Chey, thank you for your kind and gracious comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from Dklrdmcches
I enjoyed this piece very much. great imagery was found within your well written and beautiful words. you have woven a story of heart and soul. thanks for sharing...DKLRD
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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I enjoyed this piece very much. great imagery was found within your well written and beautiful words. you have woven a story of heart and soul. thanks for sharing...DKLRD
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your warm response, Brooke :-)
