The Minute Poem
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Another great piece of verse,
Brooke - this is you at your best..
you never cease to amaze me how
you come up with different topics
to write about. Presentation and
rhyme just perfect.
I wish I had a six, my friend.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Another great piece of verse,
Brooke - this is you at your best..
you never cease to amaze me how
you come up with different topics
to write about. Presentation and
rhyme just perfect.
I wish I had a six, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Margaret, the wish for a six warms my heart :-) Thank you, Brooke
Comment from jakuper
Very beuatiful picture,
but words describe in such a wonderful way,
that it makes even the picture more beutiful.
Very good
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Very beuatiful picture,
but words describe in such a wonderful way,
that it makes even the picture more beutiful.
Very good
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I so appreciate your kind comments. Thank you, Brooke
Comment from MumEsGirl
It is nice to know that at least some thing in life are still free. Thankfully we have left the snow behind us and are heading into spring. That means it just rains a lot
lovely imagery in this work
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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It is nice to know that at least some thing in life are still free. Thankfully we have left the snow behind us and are heading into spring. That means it just rains a lot
lovely imagery in this work
hugs
kate
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Kate, I'm glad you have the snow behind you - I'm sure hoping this is our last hurrah! Thanks, Brooke
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is really good. Your poem sucked me into the benevolence of nature. Nature's arts are the best. Sublime art of inestimable value, but free for all. Great poem, adewpearl. kudos
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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This is really good. Your poem sucked me into the benevolence of nature. Nature's arts are the best. Sublime art of inestimable value, but free for all. Great poem, adewpearl. kudos
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Perp, thank you for such gracious comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from TinyTeena
Truly beautiful! You have used the minute poem format to perfection! Great descriptions and expressions. The last stanza sums up the entire poem - the beauty of the winter landscape is priceless and free to all those who take the time to stop, look and appreciate all this beauty - provided yearly for free from God.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Truly beautiful! You have used the minute poem format to perfection! Great descriptions and expressions. The last stanza sums up the entire poem - the beauty of the winter landscape is priceless and free to all those who take the time to stop, look and appreciate all this beauty - provided yearly for free from God.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I am so appreciative of your most generous rating and your lovely and encouraging comments - thank you so very much!! Brooke :-D
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
Looks like you played by the rules here, and managed to write a pretty good poem. I liked the rhymesmithing, and the use of near rhyme, near alliteration. A piece to be proud of.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Looks like you played by the rules here, and managed to write a pretty good poem. I liked the rhymesmithing, and the use of near rhyme, near alliteration. A piece to be proud of.
:0)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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pretty good - I'll settle for that! :-D Thank you, Brooke
Comment from sharon fallis
A simple, and very lovely poem about Gods artwork. Good word choices and usage. lovely visuals and good imagery. The painting that you chose is chilly looking, but pretty. Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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A simple, and very lovely poem about Gods artwork. Good word choices and usage. lovely visuals and good imagery. The painting that you chose is chilly looking, but pretty. Sharon
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Sharon, thank you for your kind comments and positive review, Brooke :-)
Comment from sunnychica
Your poem made me nostalgic for where I grew up. (I currently live in a place where it does not snow but I miss the beauty of it and plan to move back.) There were days when I'd be walking outside and look at how the snow lay balanced on the tree branches, with freshly fallen snow all around me and think it was one of the most beautiful things I'd seen. My favorite part of your poem was "a sculpture cast from wind's cold blast".
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Your poem made me nostalgic for where I grew up. (I currently live in a place where it does not snow but I miss the beauty of it and plan to move back.) There were days when I'd be walking outside and look at how the snow lay balanced on the tree branches, with freshly fallen snow all around me and think it was one of the most beautiful things I'd seen. My favorite part of your poem was "a sculpture cast from wind's cold blast".
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I'm so glad this brought back such good memories - thank you for your most kind review. Brooke
Comment from MJMuraco
Brooke, your poem is nicely done. I live where there is a lot of snow and I found that I write well when I am stuck inside. We are experiencing subzero weather and I plan to stay warm and write tomorrow. When the weather is nice, I prefer to be outside and enjoy it. Your poem says a lot in very few words.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Brooke, your poem is nicely done. I live where there is a lot of snow and I found that I write well when I am stuck inside. We are experiencing subzero weather and I plan to stay warm and write tomorrow. When the weather is nice, I prefer to be outside and enjoy it. Your poem says a lot in very few words.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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We get warm weather by the weekend - right now I'm covered with blankets and sweaters :-) Thank you, Brooke
Comment from words
Lovely. A perfect jewel. Love your word usage. Each stanza is beautifully crafted. A wonderful poem to read aloud...the words are delicious in the mouth
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Lovely. A perfect jewel. Love your word usage. Each stanza is beautifully crafted. A wonderful poem to read aloud...the words are delicious in the mouth
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your most gracious comments! Brooke
