Love Can't Be Denied
The eyes are the windows of the soul.38 total reviews
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful, this triolet Nancy. Nice flow and rhyme and well chosen repeating line. Love is often blind for the wrong reasons, Nancy... The presentation is beautiful too. Fia xx
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Wonderful, this triolet Nancy. Nice flow and rhyme and well chosen repeating line. Love is often blind for the wrong reasons, Nancy... The presentation is beautiful too. Fia xx
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and stars Fia dear, Have a lovely day. Nancy:)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I can't wait until they give me more six stars to use.
I think you chose the most beautiful words for your repeating lines. This triolet is really eye-appealing in all aspects ... artwork, font color and style, black background.
A most-wonderful love poem :)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I can't wait until they give me more six stars to use.
I think you chose the most beautiful words for your repeating lines. This triolet is really eye-appealing in all aspects ... artwork, font color and style, black background.
A most-wonderful love poem :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the review Gale. Have a nice day! Nancy:)
Comment from Mastery
Excellent poetry, Nancy. Your triolet has many good lines, but I liked this one especially well:
"yet wise men often are too blind to see." (Isn't that the truth?) Love may be blind but it also can open your heart and your mind.
Bless you. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Excellent poetry, Nancy. Your triolet has many good lines, but I liked this one especially well:
"yet wise men often are too blind to see." (Isn't that the truth?) Love may be blind but it also can open your heart and your mind.
Bless you. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review Bob. Nancy:)
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:) Bob
Comment from Mastery
Excellent poetry, Nancy. Your triolet has many good lines, but I liked this one especially well:
"yet wise men often are too blind to see." (Isn't that the truth?) Love may be blind but it also can open your heart and your mind.
Bless you. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Excellent poetry, Nancy. Your triolet has many good lines, but I liked this one especially well:
"yet wise men often are too blind to see." (Isn't that the truth?) Love may be blind but it also can open your heart and your mind.
Bless you. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review Bob. Nancy:)
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:) Bob
Comment from RodG
Although your message/ topic is not that original in any love poem, I like how the Speaker expresses his sentiments in a TRIOLET.
Also, I really like the artwork chosen to enhance your poem.
Rod
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Although your message/ topic is not that original in any love poem, I like how the Speaker expresses his sentiments in a TRIOLET.
Also, I really like the artwork chosen to enhance your poem.
Rod
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and stars RodG. Have a nice day! Nancy:)
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Nancy,
I loved your poem, "Love Can't Be Denied" and its gentle verses. It is one's definition of love that is both true and lasting. Thank your for sharing its beauty with us.
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Dear Nancy,
I loved your poem, "Love Can't Be Denied" and its gentle verses. It is one's definition of love that is both true and lasting. Thank your for sharing its beauty with us.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review Deborah. Enjoy the day! Nancy:)
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:)
Comment from June Sargent
Lovely sentiments, lovely illustration. You highlight the eyes being the windows to the soul - reflecting what is in the heart. However, we need to open our eyes to show our love and to see the love being offered in return. Otherwise, love can be blind. I enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Lovely sentiments, lovely illustration. You highlight the eyes being the windows to the soul - reflecting what is in the heart. However, we need to open our eyes to show our love and to see the love being offered in return. Otherwise, love can be blind. I enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the review June. Have a lovely day. Nancy:)
Comment from Heather Knight
This is short, but sweet. I love the repetition of 'love can't be denied' and the rhyme.
Your artwork is precious.
There's a typo in line four: you wrote denied with y.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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This is short, but sweet. I love the repetition of 'love can't be denied' and the rhyme.
Your artwork is precious.
There's a typo in line four: you wrote denied with y.
Thanks for sharing.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thanks for catching that typo Maria. I do appreciate the edit. Have a nice day. Nancy:)
