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Comment from flylikeaneagle
Jannypan: excellent descriptive words of dawn. You give credit
to the creator of the sun by He, maybe, use God. Wonderful
photo and movement of words. flylikeaneagle
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Jannypan: excellent descriptive words of dawn. You give credit
to the creator of the sun by He, maybe, use God. Wonderful
photo and movement of words. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Nancy for taking time to read & review my poem. I did change that word. Jan
Comment from Tadite
As I say for all well written religious poetry: it doesn't mean anything spiritual to me, but it clearly does to you, and that's all that matters. You write out of clear admiration, and you do it well.
I love the well-written list of adjectives that can easily put the reader into the mindset of this awed person viewing something so ordinary and daily as a beautiful thing in its simplicity and in its unseen beauty.
Good luck in the contest!
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As I say for all well written religious poetry: it doesn't mean anything spiritual to me, but it clearly does to you, and that's all that matters. You write out of clear admiration, and you do it well.
I love the well-written list of adjectives that can easily put the reader into the mindset of this awed person viewing something so ordinary and daily as a beautiful thing in its simplicity and in its unseen beauty.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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Tadite,
Thank you for taking time to read & review my poem. Much appreciated. Jan
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Jan,
That picture is gorgeous and advertises your message well. Great syllables in each line to form the nonet. I like the, "night's velvet curtain" part. That's a terrific visual :) Your words form a nice shape on the page.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
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Hi Jan,
That picture is gorgeous and advertises your message well. Great syllables in each line to form the nonet. I like the, "night's velvet curtain" part. That's a terrific visual :) Your words form a nice shape on the page.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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Joy,
I really appreciate your time reading, reviewing, commenting on my poem. All are appreciated. Jan
Comment from Sasha
This is a beautiful poem and a perfect Nonet. I haven't read many Nonets lately and must admit I miss them. Brooke wrote many and this one is superb as were hers.
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This is a beautiful poem and a perfect Nonet. I haven't read many Nonets lately and must admit I miss them. Brooke wrote many and this one is superb as were hers.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you SP for your great review. Much appreciated. Jan
Comment from R56Ma3
The words just captures a very picturesque and vivid scene in my mind. Very inspiring as well. God Bless and Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem. R56ma3
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The words just captures a very picturesque and vivid scene in my mind. Very inspiring as well. God Bless and Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem. R56ma3
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Thank you for your super review & comments. I really appreciate both. Jan
Comment from MercurySeven
That's a clever take on the nonet, which, to be honest, isn't one of my favourite forms. You use the diminishing line lengths to great effect here, focusing in on the essence of the (beautifully described) experience of dawn. It's all well done, but the most powerful word of the piece, for me, is "moment" - both its placement and its effect. This has to be a strong contender in the contest. Well done!
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That's a clever take on the nonet, which, to be honest, isn't one of my favourite forms. You use the diminishing line lengths to great effect here, focusing in on the essence of the (beautifully described) experience of dawn. It's all well done, but the most powerful word of the piece, for me, is "moment" - both its placement and its effect. This has to be a strong contender in the contest. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you Mercury Seven for dropping by to read& review my poem. Both mean a lot to me. Jan
Comment from estory
Nice form here, I like the way wound in on itself, spinning faster and faster like a skater in a pirouette. The colors whirled around here, enchanting the reader, spinning a web of experience, a show put on by the Almighty for our pleasure. estory
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Nice form here, I like the way wound in on itself, spinning faster and faster like a skater in a pirouette. The colors whirled around here, enchanting the reader, spinning a web of experience, a show put on by the Almighty for our pleasure. estory
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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story,
I appreciate your time reviewing my poem. Thank you so much. Jan
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
ebbing, flowing,
swirling, twirling, ever
evolving spectrum--
awe-inspiring,
picturesque,
moment--
dawn!
A stunning nonet well done kindest regards meia x
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ebbing, flowing,
swirling, twirling, ever
evolving spectrum--
awe-inspiring,
picturesque,
moment--
dawn!
A stunning nonet well done kindest regards meia x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you Meia for dropping by to read & review my poem. Jan
Comment from jppoet
A superb poem, crafted in the confines of a NONET, it conveys all the wonders of day and night within its domain. best wishes to you in this contest and for your artistry. blessings.
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A superb poem, crafted in the confines of a NONET, it conveys all the wonders of day and night within its domain. best wishes to you in this contest and for your artistry. blessings.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you jp for stopping by to read & review my poem. Both are appreciated. Jan
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Earth presents undulating waves
of colors--ebbing, flowing,
swirling, twirling, ever
evolving spectrum--
When I first read this I thought it said, Presidents
If you do that the poem could be describing President Trump.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Earth presents undulating waves
of colors--ebbing, flowing,
swirling, twirling, ever
evolving spectrum--
When I first read this I thought it said, Presidents
If you do that the poem could be describing President Trump.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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haha Thanks Thomas for the fun review. I appreciate your time. Jan
