Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Nicely done. I think that you did very nicely with the iambic tetrameter scheme.
Your poem has good flow and rhythm. The story is well told.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thank you for such a wonderful review. 8-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem for the Poetry Potlatch. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the great art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thank you for a nice review. Love you.

reply by Teri7 on 24-Jan-2018

you are so welcome! love you too my friend!

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

You paint a fearsome portrait of a thunderstorm. I have always been fascinated by them. I find something majestic and powerful about them. Different strokes.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Oh, I feel the same way. I love a good thunder-boomer. I just hate it if the power goes out. Yarg!!!!

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I really like this descriptive way you described a blustery day. I like the flow, artwork, and content of this poem. Thank you for sharing this. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thank you for saying so. I appreciate this lovely review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a very well written duo rhyme poem , enjoyed the pleasant rhymes read; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thank you for this wonderful review. Very much appreciated.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
A very interesting, creative, and well-crafted poem! I love to attempt new formats.
The visual imagery in your poem is very descriptive! Well-crafted!

diane

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

You should join us in Potlatch. It's such fun and we learn, too. Thank you so much.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Yvonne;
Thank you for sharing this poem and new poetic form (for me.) The form looks complex, but when it is broken down into its parts, it is easy to see how you were able to structure the piece.

Well done
~patty~

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

You must try it. If I can, you can. Thank you for a great review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yvonne,
This was a great style to write about the wild winds [or any nature thing]. You did an excellent job expressing how the wind acts. Your rhymes work well & you created great imagery. Perfect picture, too. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Oh, thank you for this wonderful review. You always say the nicest things. 8-)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great use of rhymes and alliteration on this one to portray a fearsome storm that disappeared. Yes, "if only this had been foretold" is what we say often when the weatherman failed us!

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Which he does frequently, bless his heart. Thank you for reviewing.