Dream Sequence
Another foray into the darkside40 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
And what a doppelgänger! This is a fun, dark poem about cannables. It is also a story about seduction and given into ones dark desires. Your words are well chosen to convey a haunting mood of obsession. Thank you for sharing and scaring.
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And what a doppelgänger! This is a fun, dark poem about cannables. It is also a story about seduction and given into ones dark desires. Your words are well chosen to convey a haunting mood of obsession. Thank you for sharing and scaring.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from ronnie k
Luna I am not much for the dark side but you my friend manage to put a little light on the darkness, I read your present mindset with a attitude of a miner searching for gold, the end of a rainbow LOL, if I don't find the meaning I always have a smile because I know there is something there, HAPPY HOLIDAYS
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Luna I am not much for the dark side but you my friend manage to put a little light on the darkness, I read your present mindset with a attitude of a miner searching for gold, the end of a rainbow LOL, if I don't find the meaning I always have a smile because I know there is something there, HAPPY HOLIDAYS
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from Heather Knight
The eating a heart part is kind of scary. And when the heart continues beating, it's even worse. I'm going to have nightmares tonight.
This is indeed different and unique. Kudos!
Thanks for sharing.
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The eating a heart part is kind of scary. And when the heart continues beating, it's even worse. I'm going to have nightmares tonight.
This is indeed different and unique. Kudos!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hey, Jeni,
This one feels like something ol' Dean Kuch would have written, (high praise). Your dark imagery flies off the page leaving the reader in a state of shock with its thought of eating the brains of loved ones....brrrr!
Still, I appreciate your insights into this subject along with your solid delivery of this thought...well done.
And, without the darkness, we wouldn't be able to appreciate the light, so...
Happy Holidays to you and your family,
Bill
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Hey, Jeni,
This one feels like something ol' Dean Kuch would have written, (high praise). Your dark imagery flies off the page leaving the reader in a state of shock with its thought of eating the brains of loved ones....brrrr!
Still, I appreciate your insights into this subject along with your solid delivery of this thought...well done.
And, without the darkness, we wouldn't be able to appreciate the light, so...
Happy Holidays to you and your family,
Bill
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Something sure took you over, this is kind of gross. I must confess that I found it interesting and fun to read, though. It is sure the dark side. Good work.
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Excellent. Something sure took you over, this is kind of gross. I must confess that I found it interesting and fun to read, though. It is sure the dark side. Good work.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from mbroyles2
You have truly journeyed to the dark side.
I kind of like it. :)
Terrific imagery
Quick flowing
Have a Merry Christmas
Michael
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You have truly journeyed to the dark side.
I kind of like it. :)
Terrific imagery
Quick flowing
Have a Merry Christmas
Michael
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great Christmas poem. I'll tell it to the kids as we roast chestnuts this evening. I'll tell them it's a true story. it's told every year at this season.
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A great Christmas poem. I'll tell it to the kids as we roast chestnuts this evening. I'll tell them it's a true story. it's told every year at this season.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from tfawcus
Certainly on the dark side and suitably gruesome. The idea of eating out the hearts of family while they are still living makes one think. Metaphorically this does seem to happen in some families, especially just around Christmas when they are all thrown together for a bit!
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Certainly on the dark side and suitably gruesome. The idea of eating out the hearts of family while they are still living makes one think. Metaphorically this does seem to happen in some families, especially just around Christmas when they are all thrown together for a bit!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from royowen
I was thinking your poetic inclination was swinging off a little to the left opposed to the right. But as your poetic crafting is always leaning toward the eloquent side of creativity, I found this to be just as attractive as your other posts, albeit self indulgent, but well done, your abilities are very captivating, Jeni,, blessings, Roy,
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I was thinking your poetic inclination was swinging off a little to the left opposed to the right. But as your poetic crafting is always leaning toward the eloquent side of creativity, I found this to be just as attractive as your other posts, albeit self indulgent, but well done, your abilities are very captivating, Jeni,, blessings, Roy,
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
YUK! Where did this one come from?? LOL, you go everywhere with your poetry, Jeni, no bars in your way! I loved Hannibal, lol, the book version was better than the film. Well done, I think you are giving Dean a run for his money now! :) Sandra xxx
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YUK! Where did this one come from?? LOL, you go everywhere with your poetry, Jeni, no bars in your way! I loved Hannibal, lol, the book version was better than the film. Well done, I think you are giving Dean a run for his money now! :) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
