Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Hey this was a good, SHORT?? chapter. I wonder how much actual history is part of this story. Also about Gunter's murder being made to look like it was done by the Indians reminded me of another writer's Western stories including some native Americans characters and the kind of punishments they often dished out. Just one spag. The s(h)ort version is Gunter won.
Thanks again.
I think you saw my recent poem and the Revived one for Mother's Day? "

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from fimarie78

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this excerpt. I could imagine it as n adaptation for film. Obviously, I will need to read more to know the characters better, but I felt the dialogue flowed well and you gave us a good sense of the location and the plot here.

Interesting revelation at the end.

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

Thia well written. It's a good storyline. At this time, I don't see any mistakes that need to be changed or corrected. Thank you for sharing.

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Soni is still in the process of trying to pin down Alex into telling her how Gunter was killed and she suspects that the man he won the land off gambling in a poker game, was the same man that killed him, however they're no closer to finding out how the extra 125,000 acres came from! Well done, neat episode, will they find out? Blessings, Roy
Typo : the (sort) version is Gunter won the land. Short?

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review. I will make that correct. I thought I said Gunter got the land by winning a poker game.

reply by royowen on 08-May-2016

It sounded like, it was assumed he did. Barbara,

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Another exciting addition
to your book. You are getting
really quite good at this
"cliff hanger" stuff...LOL.
As I have come to expect; your
verbiage is most descriptive and
your dialogues spot on for the
portrayed scenes. Now this reader
will wait with anxious anticipation
for your next installment. No nits or
spags, exciting and enjoyable. Lora

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the encouraging review.

reply by L.lora on 08-May-2016

You are most welcome. Lora

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Indians were often framed for the deaths of whites. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

You are so very talented and have a great talent of writing so the reader feels right there where you are writing about. I didn't realize Texas bordered all those states. Very nice and Happy Mother's Day to you.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for the encouraging review. Happy Mother's Day too.