The Devil by Firelight, part 11
The final confrontation32 total reviews
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Great chapter. You've changed the dynamics at exactly the right time and I does provoke reader speculation. will the sheriff show up, her vacationing father, maybe Santa Claus...is it Christmas yet?
Typo in this sentence...SWEAT
Cold seat collected on her brow as she crept closer.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Great chapter. You've changed the dynamics at exactly the right time and I does provoke reader speculation. will the sheriff show up, her vacationing father, maybe Santa Claus...is it Christmas yet?
Typo in this sentence...SWEAT
Cold seat collected on her brow as she crept closer.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you again for the awesome review and the stellar rating.
Comment from Misrael
Someone like that deserves to have a red hot poker put on his balls and penis and go through a living hell and then cut them off. You make this come alive and I can just about feel the fear and dread. Not to mention her anger. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Someone like that deserves to have a red hot poker put on his balls and penis and go through a living hell and then cut them off. You make this come alive and I can just about feel the fear and dread. Not to mention her anger. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I agree wholeheartedly. Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
