Dog
A dog alone...34 total reviews
Comment from Ekim777
Very well written in every detail. THey say a dog takes on the character of its master. If so I'd hate to meet you in a dark alley. Maybe the monster canine was the dark side of your pet. Whatever the case you certainly know your dog and perhaps most other dogs according the visual image you have created. From a literary point of view,you have promoted fear in a most controlled, believable way. Well done. - Ekim
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
Very well written in every detail. THey say a dog takes on the character of its master. If so I'd hate to meet you in a dark alley. Maybe the monster canine was the dark side of your pet. Whatever the case you certainly know your dog and perhaps most other dogs according the visual image you have created. From a literary point of view,you have promoted fear in a most controlled, believable way. Well done. - Ekim
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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OH Dear Ekim!! I am far from vicious...I just like scary stories!! My real dog is a happy, playful and beautiful brown Lab, named Buddy! I am much like him, for the most part. I get sad a lot tho...but I'm no demon! I do thank you for this very kind and most welcome review tho! Smiles!! Susan
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I was just kidding. I prefer cats myself. - Ekim
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") I get it...LOL! I am glad! I have a cat too...she is inside with me and my best little friend..")) Susan
Comment from oNray
this was an interesting read. I thought the story short but the content was good and given to the reader in a manor that keeps the reader anxious. Presents well.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
this was an interesting read. I thought the story short but the content was good and given to the reader in a manor that keeps the reader anxious. Presents well.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Hi again!! Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed this too! I had to try something spooky for Halloween, not that I 'celebrate' it at all, but for the site. Thanks again !! Susan
Comment from Trybuck
Dog should have lived but that's life...Should have, could have and would have.... IF ONLY... Maybe the next underdog will make it...
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
Dog should have lived but that's life...Should have, could have and would have.... IF ONLY... Maybe the next underdog will make it...
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Hi there! I will save the hero the next time Buck...just for you! I had to write something to go with that horrific picture! Whoa!! ")) Susan
Comment from c_lucas
Survival of the fitest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
Survival of the fitest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Hi Charlie!! Yes! Thanks...you get it...plus I had to write something for the scary picture...Geez, what teeth! I would have a heart failure if I met this in the woods!! ")) Susan
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You're welcome, Susan. Hit the on the nose with a big rock. They will flee. If it doesn't work, Give them indigestion. Charlie
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HA! Okay!! ")) S.