Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Part two, Chapter 11"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Gungalo
There is a romantic ending coming up. Anyone who can go through what she has and still find the harvest noon so enticing must be a romantic. You too Barb.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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There is a romantic ending coming up. Anyone who can go through what she has and still find the harvest noon so enticing must be a romantic. You too Barb.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Smile!!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Great chapter.
I love the legend you told about the Indian maiden.
This chapter shows to me how much Troy cares for Anna.
Will we ever find out who tried to abduct Michael?
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Hello Barb
Great chapter.
I love the legend you told about the Indian maiden.
This chapter shows to me how much Troy cares for Anna.
Will we ever find out who tried to abduct Michael?
Gert
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Nanashirley
I like the way the story is growing. I think that the life of these women run up and down. They may have some respite while the guy is in jail but they always show up.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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I like the way the story is growing. I think that the life of these women run up and down. They may have some respite while the guy is in jail but they always show up.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mmmichelle34
As always I love to read your writing I have not been on here in a while so I was not able to ketch up on the beginning of this story but I do love your style of writing and how you add a background to the story and keeping the reader interested all through great work ..
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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As always I love to read your writing I have not been on here in a while so I was not able to ketch up on the beginning of this story but I do love your style of writing and how you add a background to the story and keeping the reader interested all through great work ..
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MS Writer
You're keeping us curious at this crucial time. The flow is good and we really like your characters. They are wonderful people and I hope that there are enough of these people around to help anyone that is abused. Great read.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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You're keeping us curious at this crucial time. The flow is good and we really like your characters. They are wonderful people and I hope that there are enough of these people around to help anyone that is abused. Great read.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ameyrowitz
Your story progresses nicely, with developments in this chapter. The dialogue is crisp. The reader, I believe, must necessarily be quite concerned for Anna's situation. There are emotional attachments (love blooming?) that are hinted, added to the intrigue. Very well written narrative.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Your story progresses nicely, with developments in this chapter. The dialogue is crisp. The reader, I believe, must necessarily be quite concerned for Anna's situation. There are emotional attachments (love blooming?) that are hinted, added to the intrigue. Very well written narrative.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from HPicasso
You are doing a good jobwith developing Anna's and Troy's relationship. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words for me.. I gave 6 stars because was a very easy reading peace of work, You have a great way of expressing your words.. Thank you.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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You are doing a good jobwith developing Anna's and Troy's relationship. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words for me.. I gave 6 stars because was a very easy reading peace of work, You have a great way of expressing your words.. Thank you.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
Good chapter,I didn't think they would be so stupid so soon either. Very glad the story is going as well as it is. If only real life could also do so well. Great story Barbara.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Good chapter,I didn't think they would be so stupid so soon either. Very glad the story is going as well as it is. If only real life could also do so well. Great story Barbara.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
Now maybe Anna and Troy will get a shot at a relationship. I liked the hint of romance. I can't feel comfortable about Anna's safety. Maybe someone should go to the Brian Connor school of resolution and hope Bobby tries something.
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*When she walked into the living *groom *(finger stuck on 'g' I suspect)
Connie
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Now maybe Anna and Troy will get a shot at a relationship. I liked the hint of romance. I can't feel comfortable about Anna's safety. Maybe someone should go to the Brian Connor school of resolution and hope Bobby tries something.
Note:
*When she walked into the living *groom *(finger stuck on 'g' I suspect)
Connie
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I had changed that sentence and then got gigged for forgetting the g on living room. I knew I had put it there, now I know where it went. Thanks for finding it.
Comment from writerwish
So glad to catch up and see that Michael is okay. I know I'm acting like this is real, but I can't help it. Your stories sound so real. Now I will wonder what Troy does meeting Anna's gaze.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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So glad to catch up and see that Michael is okay. I know I'm acting like this is real, but I can't help it. Your stories sound so real. Now I will wonder what Troy does meeting Anna's gaze.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
