Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Patty, I love reading about animals. They are so much fun and you described their first encounter well. I'm sure they became great friends before too long.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Hi Mel; thank you so much for reading this chapter of Pet Stories. I'm glad you enjoyed this tail, um tale.
~patty~

reply by MelB on 15-May-2017

You're welcome:)

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your non-fiction story. Animal stories are always a hit and children especially love to read these or have them read to them. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

thank you so much for your kind review and warm comments,
~patty~

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

Excellent work; not only in the editing, but for the observation. Dogs do tend to be fascinated by cats and he antipathy between the species is often just that they have such differing ways. I'm very much enjoying this series.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

thank you so much for your warm review and reception for the story line. I appreciate your support,
~patty~

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great description of that first dramatic encounter! I guess Simba let Harley know who was the Alpha animal around there. I like that you described how Harley focused on his name and on his new owner's face. I've noticed that animals do that.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

thank you so much for the warm review. This is a day etched in my memory - Simba's paw looked so big as it came down on Harley's little head!
~patty~

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

This is a good read.
Well-written.
Nicely polished.
Good details.
Cute artwork: The image shown supports the story. Both cats look adorable, especially the grey one.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Hi Nicole; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story,
~patty~

Comment from Annie_ Stone

Excellent

That was very cute, animals can be sp much fun & they are in many ways, like children. Have you sen: A dog's Purpose? It's great story and for animal lovers...
Thanks for letting us meet Harley, Leo and Simba.
Annie

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Hi Annie; thank you so much for your review of this story. My stories about my pets have been gracing the pages of FanStory for about seven years now. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from Clarekr

Excellent

I liked this story very much. It has good imagery and describes in good details how animals act when they are in a new situation, except maybe they whine more in the car. Nice job.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story,
~patty~

Comment from Mabaker

Exceptional

I don't know how many 6's FS allows but you're getting one. I love this story of Simba and Harley meeting his new housemates Simba and Leo. Harley will come about in due time animals have their own way with new housemates. I love this . Anne

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Hi Anne; thank you for the shiny stars on Harley's introduction to the pet stories. You will see more stories about him and his adventures. I so appreciate you following along - thank you for your support,
~patty~
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Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

Harley in forced or brought into a whole new world and life to thrash out. He does what any reasonable cat does. He has a discussion to get some things cleared up. After exploring this unfamiliar world, his sense directs him to safely to rest.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. Harley turns out to be quite a character - look him in several more stories,
~patty~

reply by pbomar1115 on 14-May-2017

Ok.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I'm surprised you even tried to mix adult cats. I guess you were lucky that it worked out. You're braver than I am. I like this story, as told by Harley. :)

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Hi Phyllis; oh, its even worse than mixing cats - Harley is a puppy! He did manage to win over Simba, but Leo never trusted him. I will have more stories about the interactions of the gang,
~patty~

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 14-May-2017

Ohh... Maybe you could make that more clear. I can see why dogs and cats could have difficulties getting along... only at first, tho. :)

reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Hi Phyllis - thanks for the tip; I went back and made it more obvious that Harley is a dog and NOT a cat. I appreciate you reading and reviewing - I always enjoy your input,
~patty~