Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Chapter 12; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Michelle S
This is very good. The actions scenes are well written, and keep the chapter moving at good pace. Great job and all my blessings.
Michelle
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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This is very good. The actions scenes are well written, and keep the chapter moving at good pace. Great job and all my blessings.
Michelle
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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thank you for you kind review.
Comment from mountainwriter49
HI Barbara,
This chapter has a good deal of fast paced action and I
found myself "glued" to the screen until I completed the
read. The story is developing quite nicely. Thanks for not
digressing in "TV dialogue" when you presented conversations
between characters.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Ray
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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HI Barbara,
This chapter has a good deal of fast paced action and I
found myself "glued" to the screen until I completed the
read. The story is developing quite nicely. Thanks for not
digressing in "TV dialogue" when you presented conversations
between characters.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Ray
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from jaeladarling
What excitement and suspense! A great read all the way through. Congrats on All Time Best - well deserved! Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and best wishes with this work. :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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What excitement and suspense! A great read all the way through. Congrats on All Time Best - well deserved! Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and best wishes with this work. :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your encouraging words and the review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barbara, you never fail to impress me with your work, your writing is always a pleasure to read. You kept me hooked from beginning to end, you always leave the reader - wanting more, excellent job, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Barbara, you never fail to impress me with your work, your writing is always a pleasure to read. You kept me hooked from beginning to end, you always leave the reader - wanting more, excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
This is an exciting chapter. I almost stood up and cheered when Sara told Joe she loves him...bout time she said that! I am worried about Joe disappearing behind one of the doors...what will he find there? Can he rescue Cassie? I hope your chemo goes well on Thursday. I have a feeling that it will as you are having a lot of prayers said in your behalf, including mine. Be well dear-heart. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Hi Barbara,
This is an exciting chapter. I almost stood up and cheered when Sara told Joe she loves him...bout time she said that! I am worried about Joe disappearing behind one of the doors...what will he find there? Can he rescue Cassie? I hope your chemo goes well on Thursday. I have a feeling that it will as you are having a lot of prayers said in your behalf, including mine. Be well dear-heart. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and prayers. How can anything go wrong when I have so many people praying for me?
Comment from Magic Wand
Dramatic, adventurous, romantic, and breathtaking action. All the elements of a good read. The suspense is becoming palpable. I look forward to the outcome, hoping to hail the conquering hero and swoon over the love story. Best wishes to your during your illness. There are many heroes in regards to this story.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Dramatic, adventurous, romantic, and breathtaking action. All the elements of a good read. The suspense is becoming palpable. I look forward to the outcome, hoping to hail the conquering hero and swoon over the love story. Best wishes to your during your illness. There are many heroes in regards to this story.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Sefiros
What a cliffhanger. I saw it shot by shot like an episode of NCIS. You keep the paragraphs short and sweet while giving full attention to every detail. Congratulations on finishing the novel. something I've yet to do in twenty years. Good luck with the chemo.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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What a cliffhanger. I saw it shot by shot like an episode of NCIS. You keep the paragraphs short and sweet while giving full attention to every detail. Congratulations on finishing the novel. something I've yet to do in twenty years. Good luck with the chemo.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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I don't post any stories unless they are complete. I have to know the outcome before I post, so I know where I am going. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Juana
The chapter is solid, though during the dialogue I have to really concentrate, or re-read to follow what is going on, and who is speaking. A couple more acknowledgements of who is saying what wouldn't go amiss. Chemo can be a bastard, pardon my language. My mother went through 8 rounds 2 years ago, and still takes a minor dose daily. May all go well with you.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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The chapter is solid, though during the dialogue I have to really concentrate, or re-read to follow what is going on, and who is speaking. A couple more acknowledgements of who is saying what wouldn't go amiss. Chemo can be a bastard, pardon my language. My mother went through 8 rounds 2 years ago, and still takes a minor dose daily. May all go well with you.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Your mother is in my prayers. I will recheck my speech tags.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
chapter twenty-seven was jam packed with action. Your action sequences are fantastic. Excellent dialogue and great descriptive writing cap off your chapter. Joe was so brave charging in to save Cassie. I'm biting my nails at the fate of Joe. I'm praying for you go get better. I'm sending your a cyber hug. Chapter twenty-seven is fantastic, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Barbara,
chapter twenty-seven was jam packed with action. Your action sequences are fantastic. Excellent dialogue and great descriptive writing cap off your chapter. Joe was so brave charging in to save Cassie. I'm biting my nails at the fate of Joe. I'm praying for you go get better. I'm sending your a cyber hug. Chapter twenty-seven is fantastic, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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It was a wonderful hug. Thank you for your review and support.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A very intense chapter, Barbara..
grabbing the attention throughout
Don't do anything stupid, until I get there." - Here - it seems he is saying it will be all right to do something stupid once I get there??? Might you consider... simply...
In the meantime, don't do anything stupid.
along side
alongside
Margaret
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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A very intense chapter, Barbara..
grabbing the attention throughout
Don't do anything stupid, until I get there." - Here - it seems he is saying it will be all right to do something stupid once I get there??? Might you consider... simply...
In the meantime, don't do anything stupid.
along side
alongside
Margaret
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I will make those changes.
