Comment from Veronica Grace

Excellent

I like this style of poetry. It reads like a song. Nature always reads like music to the ears. Thanks for the information on the poetry and the birds and bees. Veronica Grace

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2009

Veronica Grace - thank you. I so appreciate your gracious review :-) Brooke

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

How beautiful this is, Brooke, and what a perfect artwork for your poem. Both the hummer and honey bee bring such joy to watch and your beautiful words leave the reader in awe.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Karyn. So glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from Dave M

Excellent

Brooke,

This is an excellent poem, flawless and a delight to read. In fact, this might be good as a teaching aid for children.

In the summer, we keep a hummingbird feeder off our porch and watch all the hummies. Each one thinks he owns the feeder, and they get in many squabbles.

Dave

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Dave. That must be so great to see them all the time - I consider them a rare treasure :-) Brooke

Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

You continue to amaze with the beauty and variety of poetry you craft! Brooke, how do you do it? I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks also for your informative author's notes. I've no suggestion for improvement. Thanks for posting. -ray

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Ray, and Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! Brooke :-)

Comment from earthlybeing

Excellent

Love this one. So true that they do carry hope on each stop they make. How could anyone question the awesome power of the Lord after such miracles as these. Great poem. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Jeanette. I so appreciate your gracious review :-) Brooke

Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hey Brooke,

Beautiful triolet! Not at all forced. I love the picture you chose to go with it. Hummingbirds are my favorite birds, though they can be little devils sometimes!! Didn't really think about they pollinating plants, but I reckon they do.

Thanks for sharing this terrific poem with us!

smiles,

deb

I've been VERY busy, & the muse hasn't been visiting me. Still isn't around, but I've been missing my buddies. Hope you're doing well.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Deb. I hope the busy thing is good! :-) Brooke

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

Hi Brooke,
What a wonderful little poem this is about the pollinators!
Yes hope indeed travels on the tiny wings of hummingbirds
and honeybees as they fly from flower to flower. I love this
triolet. Lovely picture too.
Anabella

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009

Thank you, Anabella, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from becky7777

Excellent

what a wonderful triolet. and your subject is one of the most amazing parts of nature. how everything works together to make sure there are new begingings.
Becky

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Becky - so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Hello Brooke and what a lovely and thought provoking poem. You are correct in the nature lesson and I enjoyed the notes and poem equally. Great work, Loyd

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

Thank you, Loyd - as always, I appreciate your kind reviews :-) Brooke

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 26-Nov-2009

you are so welocme, Loyd

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 26-Nov-2009

you are so welocme, Loyd

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 26-Nov-2009

you are so welocme, Loyd

Comment from HalfHoff

Excellent

Hope travels on their tiny wings ----- wow. PERFECT! As usual darlin! I really, REALLY fell for this one -- loved it. You gotz lots o talents dollface! XO Lea Ann

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2009

You have me giggling, Lea Ann, which is probably unbecoming for a woman of my "mature" years! LOL thanks so much. Brooke :-)