Quaterns: Observations on Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Great Bursts of Golden Flowers Grow"Assorted Reflections
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Comment from StevenJosephBruening
Brooke-
Love your choice of flowers. Your rhyme scheme is without fault as is your cadence. This poem remind me of one of my favorite poems, "The Dandelion's Smile" -- a poem used quite frequently by the great tibetan mystic and world reknown Buddhist mon, Thich Hanch. Best of luck and hugs!
~ Steven
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Brooke-
Love your choice of flowers. Your rhyme scheme is without fault as is your cadence. This poem remind me of one of my favorite poems, "The Dandelion's Smile" -- a poem used quite frequently by the great tibetan mystic and world reknown Buddhist mon, Thich Hanch. Best of luck and hugs!
~ Steven
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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I do not know the poem you speak of - I will have to look it up :-) Thanks, Steve. Brooke
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Brooke-
Hanh does not divuglge the name of the poet friend who this small poem but, here it is...
"I have lost my smile
but don't worry.
The dandelion has it."
He, Hanh, uses it as one of his daily mantras to relax and keep the stress of the world at bay.
~ Steven
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How absolutely wonderful!!!
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I thought you would like it. Hugs!
~ Steven
Comment from Rabianabian
Our backyard is a whole FOREST of dandelions in April! Then in June, the clovers take over and stay until late August... but never mind. Great poem! So many people consider this little sunny flower a weed, but we rarely use fertilizer on our backyard so they just grow...well, like weeds! :) But your title describes it perfectly, "Great Bursts of Golden Flowers Grow". Just wonderful. Really excellent job.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Our backyard is a whole FOREST of dandelions in April! Then in June, the clovers take over and stay until late August... but never mind. Great poem! So many people consider this little sunny flower a weed, but we rarely use fertilizer on our backyard so they just grow...well, like weeds! :) But your title describes it perfectly, "Great Bursts of Golden Flowers Grow". Just wonderful. Really excellent job.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Mary - that is when I fell in love with dandelions, when my childhood yard was covered in them, and yes, then later in clover!! :-) You've made me smile. Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
While flowers are God's gift to brighten a dismal day. Yellow is often considered to be mental energy. Wildflowers gives you something nice to think about. Very good job.
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While flowers are God's gift to brighten a dismal day. Yellow is often considered to be mental energy. Wildflowers gives you something nice to think about. Very good job.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Charlie - I appreciate your kind words - yes, it is dreadfully dismal in PA today - rain ALL day long. Brooke :-)
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You're welcome, Brook. Sunny here. Charlie
Comment from clawhammer
Dandelions should feel honored today, that you have bestowed upon them such wonderful words. This is beautiful Brooke. Well written.
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Dandelions should feel honored today, that you have bestowed upon them such wonderful words. This is beautiful Brooke. Well written.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, clawhammer - what a sweet thing to say! Brooke :-)
Comment from Lisha L
Very nicely done. I love this rhyming pattern alot and I will have to try it. THank you so much for explaining the pattern that you use. It helps me alot to see not only an example but an explination for the poem style. This gives me the chance to learn
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Very nicely done. I love this rhyming pattern alot and I will have to try it. THank you so much for explaining the pattern that you use. It helps me alot to see not only an example but an explination for the poem style. This gives me the chance to learn
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Lisha - glad you enjoy this form, one of my favorites :-) Brooke
Comment from rtrub
Another creative piece. Most people consider dandelions a nuisance but you have captivated this flower, into something so beautiful. I am really impressed with the idea and your poem. Very unique and brilliant piece. Your an interesting poet. Take care RTR
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Another creative piece. Most people consider dandelions a nuisance but you have captivated this flower, into something so beautiful. I am really impressed with the idea and your poem. Very unique and brilliant piece. Your an interesting poet. Take care RTR
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thank you, rtrub. They've never been a nuisance to me, just free beauty! Brooke :-)
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Your very welcome.
Comment from Pyrrhonian
Flawless. My second 6 star ever. Wonderful imagery and expertly crafted lines made from the best stock of rhyme, meter and aliteration. Fine work.
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Flawless. My second 6 star ever. Wonderful imagery and expertly crafted lines made from the best stock of rhyme, meter and aliteration. Fine work.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Pyrrhonian - I am honored! :-) You are most generous and I am most appreciative :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
Sweet shoots of dreams thrust true,
into the air and sky's welcoming blue.
Adrift on clouds ensconced in love,
belief runs rampant up above.
Mike
I love your golden poem, Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Sweet shoots of dreams thrust true,
into the air and sky's welcoming blue.
Adrift on clouds ensconced in love,
belief runs rampant up above.
Mike
I love your golden poem, Brooke :-)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Mike - I'm so glad you enjoyed my tribute to dandelions :-) Good to see you, my friend. Brooke :-)
Comment from jaded831
Although dandelions are weeds, I always thought of them as flowers. Granted they grow so rapidly without seed of human intervention, that only makes them more special.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Although dandelions are weeds, I always thought of them as flowers. Granted they grow so rapidly without seed of human intervention, that only makes them more special.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Jaded - I'm so glad you share my appreciation for these weeds :-) Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
What a wonderful ode to the dandelion and other wild flowers of the meadow! You've fitted in the repeated line smoothly and beautifully. I love this quatern form, and I have added it to my growing file of forms that you're inspiring me to try. It's so helpful to have a lovely example to follow, alaong with your clear instructions. Best regards, Jeanie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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What a wonderful ode to the dandelion and other wild flowers of the meadow! You've fitted in the repeated line smoothly and beautifully. I love this quatern form, and I have added it to my growing file of forms that you're inspiring me to try. It's so helpful to have a lovely example to follow, alaong with your clear instructions. Best regards, Jeanie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2009
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Jeanie, I look forward to your trying this form and am glad you enjoyed my tribute to dandelions :-) Brooke
