Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

A very nice triolet...the theme is well expressed. A little bit of love goes a very long way...nice work. Very much enjoyed it. Hugs and smiles, Susanne

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Susanne, thank you! Brooke

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Stunning piece of poetry, Brooke, and your selected artwork is awesome. Love is an awesome power and your words drive that home.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Indy, thank you! I always appreciate your visits and comments, Brooke :-)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

I enjoyed this triolet poem again very creative and very well presented I totally agree with what you state in your notes if only many more could regards Fuller

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Fuller, thank you so much! Brooke

Comment from Nescher Pyscher

Excellent

This is a theme you come back to quite a bit, Brooke. It means an awful lot to you, doesn't it?

I liked it. A good little poem - for a triolet.

;0)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Nescher, yes, it does. I'd like to think that as an intelligent person, I am aware of all the problems in our society. But as an idealist, I still want to believe most people are good deep inside and have the capacity to solve those problems. Thanks. Brooke :-)

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I love the art work presented.Wonderful words written here and when "hearts in true communion meet" is precious and belonging and caring.

Friendship and love is a great gift given to us by God.

Honeytree.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Annie, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from raw form

Excellent

Brooke when I come on here you're the firsy peron i come to see and you never dissapoint me you just seem to be locked in to my world from your own and I love that no matter how far we amy be from one another and we could pass each other in a walmart that you just leave me spellbound this poem describes what I feel for my very significant other....You just ROCK! with your words.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Well, as if the other review wasn't enough, now this one has me smiling more. Now every time I'm in a Walmart I'm going to be wondering if you're passing by! :-D Thanks again, Brooke

Comment from earthlybeing

Excellent

Wonderful poem with a great message that we all need to remember. Love is the way that we can conquer hate in the world. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Jeanette, thank you!! Brooke :-)

Comment from jadedgemini2

Excellent

Even though you said it wasn't intended as love between two people, I can see it; and yet, I can also see it as being the love for all mankind. I think it's a message that should be seen, heard and abided by at all times---but very few will. We can only keep trying:)
Great job!!
Jaded:)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Oh, it can be about romantic love easily - once a reader has any poem under her nose, it doesn't belong to the poet anymore to dictate interpretations! thanks so much, brooke :-)

reply by jadedgemini2 on 15-Apr-2009

Very true:)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Teri, thank you so much, Brooke :-)

reply by Teri7 on 16-Apr-2009

hugs

Comment from Miska

Excellent

This is really brilliant.

I love the way it sounds and the message it sends.

You have a wonderful gift. well done. regards Miska

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2009

Miska, thank you!! :-) Brooke