For The One
My intentions with poetry and friendship.39 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mike K2,
Nice to see you. I like your rhyming poem about friendship I can see how your picture connects with your thoughts when you said-
Keeps the fire burning in your soul;
moves you through life, taking no toll.
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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Hello Mike K2,
Nice to see you. I like your rhyming poem about friendship I can see how your picture connects with your thoughts when you said-
Keeps the fire burning in your soul;
moves you through life, taking no toll.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I thank you very much for sharing with me your favorite line, the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Artasylum
mike this is a beautiful poem and a true tribute to love and feelings freely given unselfishly...you have penned a lovely poem...yours, diana
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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mike this is a beautiful poem and a true tribute to love and feelings freely given unselfishly...you have penned a lovely poem...yours, diana
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I find it much easier to give feelings unselfishly then to hold back on them for selfish reasons. I don't know, maybe its my nature photograph days, I wasn't fearless, but realized that fear has it roots, but usually we are far more adaptive at the final outcome then we think. It allowed me to push the limits of what I think I am capable of. It has worked well for writing as well. lol And art...
One developes a quiet calm.
I thank you very much for the compliments and this review. Have a great week ahead, too. Mike
Comment from Twomoon
OK, MIKE!!not sure who this was for, but it matters not, for the magic, and the art come together and create the most lovely vision anyone could ask for! Enchanting and delivering a masterpiece of friendship, love, embracing a touch of romance! Loved it so much, one of my favorites of yours, I think!! Grand job..all fav lines..have some tea with me for a while, while I dance in this magic poetry and savor your lovely spirit! Beautifully done, Mike. Thanks for tea with a flower! much love twomoon
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OK, MIKE!!not sure who this was for, but it matters not, for the magic, and the art come together and create the most lovely vision anyone could ask for! Enchanting and delivering a masterpiece of friendship, love, embracing a touch of romance! Loved it so much, one of my favorites of yours, I think!! Grand job..all fav lines..have some tea with me for a while, while I dance in this magic poetry and savor your lovely spirit! Beautifully done, Mike. Thanks for tea with a flower! much love twomoon
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I mentioned in a previous piece, "For The One," is to honor the people who touched me in the past, honor people that grace me in the present and also for the one that might dare call, "Me the one." lol I notice if I make a poem feel too personal, many members start to panic and I learn about boy friends, lovers and husbands. I enjoy this air of mystery that has people guessing. Someone has created a monster. lol
I love to see the fingerprints on the spine of this one. Hopefully I will. With this review, your are Two Much and I loved it and the nice words. I am only the product of the spirit filled poetry here that swirls around me and whispers.
Thank you so much, with love, Mike.
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have some tea mike, that was a beautiful reply as lovely as the poem you wrote...you at least can tap into others joy and feel their lights and that is a gift! hugs for a great day, twomoon
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Maybe the beauty of it all is the bad influence that you are for my passionate and romantic side. lol You know what, it great to see be able to see the beauty in things. You have a great day as well.
Hugs, with love, Mike
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a bad influence.?...a bad influence.?...hehe..well, that can not be helped sir, because it is part of who I am! lol...an over all bad influence! Really, Mike it was a lovely poem and brilliant really. you have a great day, dear friend, hoping my influence continues to cause you just a little anguish!! smile...have a great day, much love two
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Just a little, you women want a man to be totally out of sorts! The best we can retaliate is to be befuttling. This sir, really appreciates your influence and grace. I don't know what I am in for when I state this, but you (and certian other people) set the standards that I honestly seek. At least I won't have a boring, thoughtless day!
With love, Mike
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hehe... that is for sure no boring and thoughtless day with some of us!!! lol...and boy what a ride!!!!!!!!!...it is to live...to life...Machu calls it the joy to vie.....smile..have a gorgeous day full of tea, rainbows, snow, showers, thunder storms, laughter, smiles, tears of joy, and just love! hugs two
Comment from Judian James
This is lovely Mike. It reads like vows and a chant almost as well. Very nicely written for "the one" I hope she loves it! excellent.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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This is lovely Mike. It reads like vows and a chant almost as well. Very nicely written for "the one" I hope she loves it! excellent.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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Me too! As my thought that are conveyed in that one are of future's making. I thank you for the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is a beautiful piece it has love flowing through the lines the person you wrote this for will be bowled over well done regards Fuller
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This is a beautiful piece it has love flowing through the lines the person you wrote this for will be bowled over well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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That will be a great thing! I thank you very much for your compliments and this reveiw. Mike
Comment from RaymondJohn
I've never seen a lighted match work as well as a metaphor for a poem before. A very loving write that must be a wonderful gift for someone. Well written. I like the images and the movement. Ray.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I've never seen a lighted match work as well as a metaphor for a poem before. A very loving write that must be a wonderful gift for someone. Well written. I like the images and the movement. Ray.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I am afraid that is not a match. I am actually holding a claigraphic pen and resting in my palm is a chrystal ball. Behind that is a six cell Magilight with a krypton gas bulb to create the plazma ball.
Thank you very much for the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Nightwind1
This was beautiful. It can be so hard to express ourselves to loved ones but in our writing, we can tell them many things that words alone can not say.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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This was beautiful. It can be so hard to express ourselves to loved ones but in our writing, we can tell them many things that words alone can not say.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I like that, but in writing, maybe those words remain, until the person has time to take them in. Thank you very much for the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from P1
oh mike, my goodness i hope whoever you wrote this for gets to see it and realizes it is for them. this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have ever read. it's not for me and you have managed to almost reduce me to tears.
simply beautiful. hugs lynda.
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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oh mike, my goodness i hope whoever you wrote this for gets to see it and realizes it is for them. this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have ever read. it's not for me and you have managed to almost reduce me to tears.
simply beautiful. hugs lynda.
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I am glad you found at least a welling up from this one. I thank you for the compliments and this review. Also for providing me with inspiration at times, too. Mike
Comment from jadapenn
This poem is a certain vow. You drug one with all the promises and I kinda like that. Your words are deep and speak of a love pure and everlasting. The picture appears to flood gold.
I liked the flow of the poem. Well done. Regards - jada
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This poem is a certain vow. You drug one with all the promises and I kinda like that. Your words are deep and speak of a love pure and everlasting. The picture appears to flood gold.
I liked the flow of the poem. Well done. Regards - jada
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2008
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I love this review and thank yo for it and the compliments as well.
