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The results of the war that took place in heaven

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Comment from royowen
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Oh yes indeed, we look forward, there are so many that are deceived by him, in fact it happens all the time. But no one will be deceived that seeks after God's protection and faith in him. Beautifully written Nomi, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    Thank you Roy. It seems that some of my reviewers are not aware of these prophesies.
reply by royowen on 05-Apr-2024
    Most wouldn?t be
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This actually gave me chills. First I could visualize the serpent/dragon and it was not pretty. Then I could see him and his minions landing on earth, not missing a beat and turning on humans. But we are protected if we choose God. No doubt in my mind. Great poem with an easy flowing rhyming pattern. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    I have every bit of faith that is exactly what happened. It is up to us to trust in God and his son Jesus Christ to show us the way to conduct ourselves so as to be able to triumph over Satan and his evil ways.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Way to tell him off, bro!! Take that satan and don't come around anymore or I will stick my Nomi on you. This is wonderful and you never backed down on little bit.
So that birthday and being one year older didn't slow you down a bit. That is awesome!! Great job, dear brother!! Love, lil sis, Debi

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Did I tell you yet, I think that you are one of the best gifts that the good lord has blessed me with. I give thanks to him for you.
reply by Debi Pick Marquette on 05-Apr-2024
    Oooh, you are so sweet!
    What did I ever do without you as a big brother in my life. After losing two, God knew what he was doing!
Comment from karenina
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Amen, Nomi! NO matter what trials and tribulations we face, our faith tells us evil will be destroyed and God will prevail. Our salvation is guaranteed if we take Jesus as our Lord and Personal Savior and unceasingly stand fast to what the Bible teaches!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your comments, and it is wonderful to hear from you.
reply by karenina on 05-Apr-2024
    Likewise!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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You never cease to amaze me my friend, and this one that won't be soon forgotten. As a young boy, with very little understanding, I spend many hours hidden away in my room reading Revelations. I only wish I had a six to reward it properly. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your awesome comments.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Happy (Belated) Birthday, Nomi!
A strong and passionate verse here, inspired by your strong faith, while having no truck with the devil and the work he does. Your rhyme is assured and your sentiments strike a chord of sheer anger at the trouble wrought on our world by lies, suffering and pain. I regret, Nomi, I'm left only with a 5 to offer for your excellent verse. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you Debbie, Your support is appreciated.
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 04-Apr-2024
    Yours too. And this is an absolute pleasure!
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Nolan
This is a good mix of prose an poetry with the poem describing the actions in the Bible verses.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the week
Joan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thanks Joan, Your comments are always welcome and appreciated.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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This is an excellent poem that documents the events that took place concerning Satan and his fall. It not only documents the past but it foretells the future and the Blessed Hope of the Christian. Thanks for being a shining light in a morally depraved abyss that is our modern culture.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much. I very much appreciate your fine comments.
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-Apr-2024
    You are most Welcome!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-Apr-2024
    You are most Welcome!
Comment from June Sargent
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Judging from world conditions, it's obvious Satan has been hurled down to the earth. Won't be long before he meets his fate. Have to hold onto our hope a little longer.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    It may not be easy to do, but it is worth the struggle.
Comment from shelley kaye
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a very interesting and thought-provoking poem.
you described the revelations verse well
with great emotion and smooth flow of words

may i suggest using a black background and white font to blend in the pic? just a thought ;)

a great poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you Shelly. Unfortunately, I am not skilled at manipulating artwork.