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A free verse love poem

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Comment from royowen
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I really could only apply this to God, there simply isn't any man that I know or have known to apply to this. (And I know and have known some pretty awesome people) But I just love this, even though the entity of the person is unrevealed, beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much, Roy!
reply by royowen on 11-Jan-2024
    My privilege
Comment from mrsmajor
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This is a well written love poem, Jessica, you have used words that certainly add to the excitement of the love that has become part of your life...The picture add to the poem's passionate feel...I wish you well in the contest!

Warmly,
Victoria

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much, Victoria!
reply by mrsmajor on 11-Jan-2024
    You're very welcome, it was indeed my Pleasure!

Comment from Yusita
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This is one "fiery" piece that eloquently conveys and describes deep feelings. Love the metaphors used. The ending lines were so good and among my favorites.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much, Yusita!!