Sink Or Swim Together!
We'll rise or fall together!64 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
While this is very serious subject matter, I love how you playfully put together six rhyming lines to convey your message. I would like to think we rise above this together.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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While this is very serious subject matter, I love how you playfully put together six rhyming lines to convey your message. I would like to think we rise above this together.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Susan Larson,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from Ulla
Hi Rhaguvir, yes, we'll get through this whether in triumph or in defeat. But together we have to stand. I loved this poem and it is so well written. What has happened to us during the last few months is unbelievable. It's a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Rhaguvir, yes, we'll get through this whether in triumph or in defeat. But together we have to stand. I loved this poem and it is so well written. What has happened to us during the last few months is unbelievable. It's a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
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Hello Ulla,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck'.
With best wishes
Comment from victor 66
I believe your 20 syllable poem for the most part. But, there will always be those people that deny the truth and will lie to your face. I just don't see how they fit into the community, outside of being a detriment. But your words to give us hope and they are of value. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I believe your 20 syllable poem for the most part. But, there will always be those people that deny the truth and will lie to your face. I just don't see how they fit into the community, outside of being a detriment. But your words to give us hope and they are of value. Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Victor 66,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Best Wishes'.
With best wishes
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You are most welcome, RP.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a warning to mankind. This virus has put the whole world together in a unique way. We need to all work together for the good of mankind if we going to overcome the problem. You poem expresses it nicely.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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This is a warning to mankind. This virus has put the whole world together in a unique way. We need to all work together for the good of mankind if we going to overcome the problem. You poem expresses it nicely.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello BethShelley,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Best Wishes'.
With best wishes
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty syllable poem about the coronavirus that rise to bring us demise and gives us no choice but to stay at home and stop the virus in its tracks.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem about the coronavirus that rise to bring us demise and gives us no choice but to stay at home and stop the virus in its tracks.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Sandra du Plessis,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from Cindy Decker
RPSaxina:
I love your thoughts-provoking photo.
As your poem warns, We need to care about our earth now more than ever; the corona scare is a warning to us all.
I like your rhyme and your words.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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RPSaxina:
I love your thoughts-provoking photo.
As your poem warns, We need to care about our earth now more than ever; the corona scare is a warning to us all.
I like your rhyme and your words.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Cindy,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Best Wishes'.
With best wishes
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You?re welcome.
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Hi Cindy,
You may call me 'RP'.
Take care, please.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Hi, RP. You?re welcome. Have a nice day.
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It's so nice of you, Cindy.
Take care.
~ RP
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sink Or Swim Together!
by RPSaxena
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest. Great presentation. Good syllable count. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Sink Or Swim Together!
by RPSaxena
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest. Great presentation. Good syllable count. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck in the contest'.
With best wishes
Comment from nomi338
Wonderful advise. As a matter of fact, I believe that one should never stop thinking. As a practice, one should always be thinking of something. Even idle thoughts can sometimes become productive as inspiration can seem to pop up out of thin air, when in fact they were conjured up by the active force of thinking.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Wonderful advise. As a matter of fact, I believe that one should never stop thinking. As a practice, one should always be thinking of something. Even idle thoughts can sometimes become productive as inspiration can seem to pop up out of thin air, when in fact they were conjured up by the active force of thinking.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
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Hello Nomi 338,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It would be wonderful if the entire world would work together to solve this problem and then continue to work together instead of concentrating on our differences. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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It would be wonderful if the entire world would work together to solve this problem and then continue to work together instead of concentrating on our differences. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I wish you luck.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Good Luck Wishes'.
With best wishes
Comment from Ogden
That certainly is excellent advice, but, unfortunately there always are the outliers who disregard what is best for the common good (Un, Assad, et al). So far, they have gotten away with it.
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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That certainly is excellent advice, but, unfortunately there always are the outliers who disregard what is best for the common good (Un, Assad, et al). So far, they have gotten away with it.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Don,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
[ United efforts on the part Positive Forces can set them right. I think so. ]
With best wishes
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You're very welcome, RP.
Don
