Love Can't Be Denied
The eyes are the windows of the soul.38 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
You would get six stars if I had them! This is very beautiful. It has a nice soft ethereal feel to it:) Great writing that I will remember!
Blessings,
Tina
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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You would get six stars if I had them! This is very beautiful. It has a nice soft ethereal feel to it:) Great writing that I will remember!
Blessings,
Tina
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and stars. Nancy:)
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You are very welcome!!
Tina😃
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Nancy, a lovely triolet. Silky rhyming. Well-chosen repeating line.
I especially liked:
Love can't be denied it needs to shine,
and I can see it when you look at me.
(Beautifully stated.)
Nancy, you really should put a book together. Your poetry is timeless. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Hello Nancy, a lovely triolet. Silky rhyming. Well-chosen repeating line.
I especially liked:
Love can't be denied it needs to shine,
and I can see it when you look at me.
(Beautifully stated.)
Nancy, you really should put a book together. Your poetry is timeless. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the kind words Margaret! Have a lovely day! Nancy:)
Comment from Sasha
I like this style of poetry, I actually understand most of the rules for it but I got lost when you got to the part on meter... always been hard for me to fully understand meter. Lovely work with this poem too.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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I like this style of poetry, I actually understand most of the rules for it but I got lost when you got to the part on meter... always been hard for me to fully understand meter. Lovely work with this poem too.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the thoughtful review and stars Sasha. Have a nice day! Nancy:)
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I will do my best
Comment from royowen
A Beautfully written triolet Nancy, you are good at these, but then you're good at writing verse, and very fine verse at that. Well done, great repeat lines, and very smooth delivery, well done, blessings, Roy,
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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A Beautfully written triolet Nancy, you are good at these, but then you're good at writing verse, and very fine verse at that. Well done, great repeat lines, and very smooth delivery, well done, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the terrific feedback Roy. You make he smile. Have a great day my friend. Nancy:)
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Hi Nancy, I loved this triolet. You make it seem so easy to write. I agree with every word in your lovely poem. The eyes can very rarely lie. One of these days I'll have a go at the form. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Hi Nancy, I loved this triolet. You make it seem so easy to write. I agree with every word in your lovely poem. The eyes can very rarely lie. One of these days I'll have a go at the form. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Triolets are easy to write once you get the hang of it. LOL Thanks for the kind words and stars Ulla. Have a lovely day! Nancy:)
Comment from Michele Harber
Nancy, this is a lovely poem and an accurate and romantic description of love. I enjoyed the word play regarding those who say "love is blind" being the ones who are "too blind to see." My one suggestion is that you put a comma or semicolon (either would be grammatically correct in this case) after "denied" each time you use it. Otherwise, you're left with a run-on sentence.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Nancy, this is a lovely poem and an accurate and romantic description of love. I enjoyed the word play regarding those who say "love is blind" being the ones who are "too blind to see." My one suggestion is that you put a comma or semicolon (either would be grammatically correct in this case) after "denied" each time you use it. Otherwise, you're left with a run-on sentence.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks Michelle, I didn't see that at all. Have a great day my friend. Nancy:)
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You're very welcome. I'm always happy to help you, and you have a great day as well.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Superb, Nancy. Your poetry of love always is because it comes from deep down in your heart. This one tells us how love must shine from your eyes, and your Jim's love certainly shined there for you. Wonderful triolet, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Superb, Nancy. Your poetry of love always is because it comes from deep down in your heart. This one tells us how love must shine from your eyes, and your Jim's love certainly shined there for you. Wonderful triolet, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and stars Sandra, Have a lovely Day my Dear friend. Nancy:)
Comment from Sugarray77
I really liked this verse, Nancy, and think you did an outstanding job crafting it. I am unfamiliar with this Triolet form, but this verse encouraged me to give it a try. Thanks for a lovely read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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I really liked this verse, Nancy, and think you did an outstanding job crafting it. I am unfamiliar with this Triolet form, but this verse encouraged me to give it a try. Thanks for a lovely read.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for the six stars Melissa. That was very sweet of you. Have a beautiful day! Nancy:)
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did a really good job with this triolet and your message is so true. Although some people do have poker faces, for most of us our expressions reveal how we are feeling. I can even see different expressions in my cat! Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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You did a really good job with this triolet and your message is so true. Although some people do have poker faces, for most of us our expressions reveal how we are feeling. I can even see different expressions in my cat! Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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I think when we get old some of us have an expression of pain. I know I must, but I brighten up when I see my kids or grandkid or great grandkids. LOL Big Smile then. Have a great day! Nancy:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Triolet poem about the love that can't be denied. We can clearly see when someone loves us when we look at their actions and how they treat us.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Triolet poem about the love that can't be denied. We can clearly see when someone loves us when we look at their actions and how they treat us.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Soooo true Sandra. Thanks for the review and stars. Nancy:)
