2018 Bernie and Howie Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Doggy Jail"...stories and poems about the boys
49 total reviews
Comment from ciliverde
Oh the poor things...I remember leaving our dog at a boarding place when I was little, and the look on her face was so awful. I'll never forget that. Now that I'm an adult, I usually have someone house sit when we go out of town and have to leave the babies behind. My three dogs are rescues, so I don't want them to think they're back at the pound again, poor lambs.
I think you did really well here, describing the emotions and distress of the boys - especially Howie. Also, recognizing some words, of course they do.
Well done!
Carol
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
Oh the poor things...I remember leaving our dog at a boarding place when I was little, and the look on her face was so awful. I'll never forget that. Now that I'm an adult, I usually have someone house sit when we go out of town and have to leave the babies behind. My three dogs are rescues, so I don't want them to think they're back at the pound again, poor lambs.
I think you did really well here, describing the emotions and distress of the boys - especially Howie. Also, recognizing some words, of course they do.
Well done!
Carol
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
You have captured the feelings of dogs really well here. I have a few and know they would feel anxiety. But being together helps. :)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
You have captured the feelings of dogs really well here. I have a few and know they would feel anxiety. But being together helps. :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written it is obvious the doggies didn't understand what was happening you brought there emotions through so well in this story I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
Yes my friend this is well written it is obvious the doggies didn't understand what was happening you brought there emotions through so well in this story I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Hi Jill: Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh I just loved your sweet story. I have three doggies and one kitty. I hate to leave them anywhere unless absolutely necessary. Great job. I enjoyed all of it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
Oh I just loved your sweet story. I have three doggies and one kitty. I hate to leave them anywhere unless absolutely necessary. Great job. I enjoyed all of it. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
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Very enjoyable. I'll be looking for more stories about them. :) Marilyn
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Patty,
What a delightful story told from Howie's point of view. You've captured the excitement our beloved pets show when we've been away for an extended period of time. I imagine that those thoughts are echoed by my poodle, Lily, each time we go away, even though she's always left with family members that love her, too.
Your story is well written and was a pleasure to read.
Kim
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
Hi Patty,
What a delightful story told from Howie's point of view. You've captured the excitement our beloved pets show when we've been away for an extended period of time. I imagine that those thoughts are echoed by my poodle, Lily, each time we go away, even though she's always left with family members that love her, too.
Your story is well written and was a pleasure to read.
Kim
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Patty that was a terrific story about Howie and Bernies trip. It's very nice to meet you Howie; I meet Bernie last week. You are very cute and cuddly, I see why mommy loves you so.lol. You wrote that really well Patty, all your little details were on point. I could see the little furry friends now. Awww. Hopoe your visit to th dentist went good. Happy to hear you enjoyed a night out.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
Patty that was a terrific story about Howie and Bernies trip. It's very nice to meet you Howie; I meet Bernie last week. You are very cute and cuddly, I see why mommy loves you so.lol. You wrote that really well Patty, all your little details were on point. I could see the little furry friends now. Awww. Hopoe your visit to th dentist went good. Happy to hear you enjoyed a night out.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here. The dentist appointment went well, and the soreness should be gone soon.
~patty~
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Oh I'm glad your feeling better. It is a wonderful thing, that Howie & Bernie give you great stories. ha ha.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Patty, this is great and seeing it from the dog's point of view. Well, we have several cats and a dog and we have to put them into a kennel when we go away for a longer spell. I often wonder what they think. You describe that very well. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
Hi Patty, this is great and seeing it from the dog's point of view. Well, we have several cats and a dog and we have to put them into a kennel when we go away for a longer spell. I often wonder what they think. You describe that very well. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from chcbeck
I love this perspective from the dogs point of view. You cleverly gradually build the story which kept me gripped from start to finish. I could read more adventures about these two.Great read thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
I love this perspective from the dogs point of view. You cleverly gradually build the story which kept me gripped from start to finish. I could read more adventures about these two.Great read thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh how sweet. I could feel Howie's pain at being jailed for the weekend. Lol. They are such sweet boys, and love their mistress so much.
I love the "pretty feet". It left a wonderful image. You have a great insight into the thoughts and feelings of your boys!
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
Oh how sweet. I could feel Howie's pain at being jailed for the weekend. Lol. They are such sweet boys, and love their mistress so much.
I love the "pretty feet". It left a wonderful image. You have a great insight into the thoughts and feelings of your boys!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words about this story. Writing about my dogs is such a pleasure for me and I'm glad I get to share the stories here,
~patty~
Comment from Mary Wakeford
This is wonderfully written from the perspective of a dog. I first thought it wasn't going to end happily...so many don't. I often wonder what our pets think when we leave, even for a day. Someone once told me they think each time we leave, we are never coming back. They is a horrifying thought, if true.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
This is wonderfully written from the perspective of a dog. I first thought it wasn't going to end happily...so many don't. I often wonder what our pets think when we leave, even for a day. Someone once told me they think each time we leave, we are never coming back. They is a horrifying thought, if true.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review, Mary. I often write from my pets' perspectives. I love to personify the animals in my life and relate the tale as they might. I've been told that our pets do worry that we may never come back, and I shutter at the thought,
~patty~