Child Prodigy (500 words)
Angel or Demon?24 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
This gifted musician is able to break free from the demons and angels pulling her soul apart. I enjoyed the piece told from her childlike point of view. Thank you for sharing this compelling piece,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
  |
This gifted musician is able to break free from the demons and angels pulling her soul apart. I enjoyed the piece told from her childlike point of view. Thank you for sharing this compelling piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
-
thanks Patty, The mystery of the Child Prodigy has always been a wonder in my mind. How do they know so much? I appreciate your words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Supernatural flash is there, somewhat mystic, a child prodigy, both Angel and Demon, rebirth, reincarnation, transformation, demonic act or will, angelic thought and activation, powerful thematic plot progression in a free flow of thoughts I liked and enjoyed feelings and emotions in a monologue perspective of narrative taletelling.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
|
Supernatural flash is there, somewhat mystic, a child prodigy, both Angel and Demon, rebirth, reincarnation, transformation, demonic act or will, angelic thought and activation, powerful thematic plot progression in a free flow of thoughts I liked and enjoyed feelings and emotions in a monologue perspective of narrative taletelling.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
-
Wow, great review. Showing me all the aspects of a story in a way I never thought of, Thank you so much.
Judy
Comment from lyenochka
This story is really thought-provoking. It starts with childhood when perhaps we are closer to the spiritual world. But this child saw the spiritual battles more clearly even into adulthood because of an accident at age four. Interesting use of Tchaikovsky's works to show the light and dark side of his soul. But I love all the pieces you mention. The ending results in freedom by choosing neither spiritual side but humanity.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
|
This story is really thought-provoking. It starts with childhood when perhaps we are closer to the spiritual world. But this child saw the spiritual battles more clearly even into adulthood because of an accident at age four. Interesting use of Tchaikovsky's works to show the light and dark side of his soul. But I love all the pieces you mention. The ending results in freedom by choosing neither spiritual side but humanity.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
-
thank you , I enjoyed writing this. Sometimes Flash fiction really makes you think in clear ways. I so appreciate your words.
Comment from Hitcher
Shit, I was brought back from the brink of death when I was two, taken out by a taxi..true! I have always, always been fascinated with angels and demons, you might be onto something here friend, your subconscious mind releasing secrect from beyond the grave : ) I thoroughly enjoyed your creative supernatural flash fiction story friend. Good luck !
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
|
Shit, I was brought back from the brink of death when I was two, taken out by a taxi..true! I have always, always been fascinated with angels and demons, you might be onto something here friend, your subconscious mind releasing secrect from beyond the grave : ) I thoroughly enjoyed your creative supernatural flash fiction story friend. Good luck !
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
-
Wow, Hicher, that is so interesting. How did you survive? I hope you will write that story. It sounds fascinating especially since you seem to have a connection that others of us lose.
Thank you for your kind words.
-
I spent six days in a coma - fractured skull,
broken - nose, collar bone, both arms, one of my legs and untold internal injuries, I basically should not have survived. I was my mothers miracle child, hence her unwavering faith in God and a soft spot in her heart for me :)
