Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I'm not too worried about the internet.The town next to me is a little larger and between the two I have found five people with the same name that I have, but with different middle names. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Thanks a lot for this great review. I am pleased that you like it, We'll see what happens. All best. Ulla

reply by c_lucas on 22-Feb-2016

You're welcome, Ulla. Charlie

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

My dear friend, your life is getting better and better, you found your mother, now you found the man of your dreams, I'm sure you will find your father.
Now I understand why you speak Spanish and why you live in Spain.
I can't wait to find out if you found your father.
Look decided at the beginning of the story.

Un abrazo para ti.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Hola Bryana, Yes I have had a very good life and still do. I love to live in Spain, a country I have known since a very small child. I lived in Madrid for a while studying Spanish literature at the University there back in the early Seventies. I have spoken Spanish or Castellano since I was very young, and read a lot of the classics. Thanks so much Bryana for following my story. Un abrazo para ti tambien. Ulla:)) Ps. Will go in to the site you mentioned. Haven't forgotten.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Ulla, it is truly wonderful that you met such a wonderful man ay=t last, but I have to admire your patience, Phoning your Mum and not asking about Dad for such a long time, that would have drove me insane.
Your beautiful story continues to keep my attention in fact I think it gets better with every chapter my friend.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Thank you so much Eric. So much was happening to me and my life in such a short time that I almost forgot about it. That's how it was. But now we are back on track. Thanks for your great compliment. More is to follow soon. all the best. Ulla:)

reply by Eric1 on 22-Feb-2016

I really do look forward to it Ulla.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I have enjoyed following along with your story thus far and you keep the story flowing along and keep it interesting. Keep up the excellent writing.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Thanks a lot. Much appreciated. All best. Ulla

Comment from Sun

Excellent

Another great post. I am enjoying reading this series. The story is very captivating and the portrayal of all the characters is excellent.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Thanks a lot for reading. Much appreciated. All best. Ulla

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

1.) Glasgow to meet with my friend. I'd (decided) to play it safe.

2.) A quick embrace, and she turned to me. "What are you having, Ulla?"
--> does this mean you embraced her BACK....? *smile*

3.) my fate was sealed. I'd just bumped into (the man who) was to become my future husband.
--> he is not a 'what'

4.) I laughed. "(Come on,) Mum, I'm fifty one, hardly a girl any more. But do tell me, how are you getting on?"

Wow! How brave you are, Ulla! I can't believe you're about to do it again! But I'm behind you! Go, girl!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Hi Robyn, Yes I am doing it again. smile! Next post will show what happened. I have made corrections and thanks for pointing them out. I really do appreciate your feed back. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I'm the biggest sucker in the world for happy endings and, especially, when good things happen to nice people. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Great chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Hi Ric, thank a bunch for this great review. More is to follow soon. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ulla

= What a nice meeting of fate, as one would say, when it came to meeting you future husband.
= Nice easy scene with your mum and Alan bonding as well.
= Very good writing, my friend.

<> Typo: decidd / decided
= my friend. I'd decidd to play it safe. It

* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*>*)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Hi Jax, I have made the corrections and several more as I read along think it reads so much tighter now. Yes, It was an amazing time and we have lived happily ever since down her in Spain. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

Wow, what a whirlwind romance. Glad it all turned out well.

- I boarded the train up to Glasgow - cut 'up' ?

-Wow, you meet a guy in a bar and decide to go sail with him. Luckily he wasn't a serial killer of some sort.

-Don't know whether he'll still be there - whether he's still there...

-Mum went on to give me his - tighten to Mum gave me...

-A few minutes later, (comma) and I was connected.

Another great cliffhanger. I can't even imagine how it must feel to ring someone and say, hi dad, I'm your daughter after 51 years. Looking forward to the continuation. :)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Hi Tessa, yeah, it was quite a year 2003. Everything just happened to me. Unbelievable!. As you know we have lived happily ever since her in Spain. I have made corrections and many more edits and I think it read so much tighter. Thanks for pointing it all out to me. All the best. Ulla. Looking forward to here about your Portugal plans.

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

You are most certainly the Queen of Cliff Hangers! Well done, Ulla. May I assume you're still with Alan?

You've led a very interesting life. Not all roses, of course, but definitely not boring. So glad you finally have the proper information for finding your Father. Now I must wait for your next chapter to find out what happens next!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Oh, Melissa, you do make me laugh. Thanks ever so much for this lovely review. Yes, I have had a very good and a rich life. Still do. And as you say, never boring. Very fortunate indeed. More to follow soon. All the best. Ulla:))