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Finding My Roots

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Comment from abbasjoy
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What a wonderful trip. Fear and trepidation coming but joy when leaving. What a delight to know that in a short while your mother would be visiting as if you were next door. A great deal of emotions being experienced by you and your mum, but truly a happy ending to that story.
Another beautifully written chapter, Ulla.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    Thank you so much, and sorry about my delayed answer. So much more to happen. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Sherylsart
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What a story you have! It is amazing how well you can get to know someone in such a short time. Did you ever think about what it would have been like if you had started to look for her a year later, after she was back in Denmark?

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    Thank you so much. Yes I did think about that and we often talked about it Mum and I. On the other hand I wouldn't have been without the time in California. A place I have known since I was young. But more is to happen so I hope you'll read on. All best. Ulla
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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How lovely. She must have money to be able to do all that so easily. Move across the ocean even her car! Wow. I am really enjoying your reunion with your mother. It is wonderful you found her and it was good. Thanks for sharing Ulla. Can't wait to know more. Nancy

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    Hi Nancy, thank you so much. You are right. Mum could indeed afford it. More is to follow soon. My story is far from over. All the best. Ulla
Comment from MelB
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As I just said, this house have already - has (have)

Hi Ulla, a great chapter. I think it is so amazing that you found each other and were able to spend this time together. It had to be very comforting to have all your questions answered, while getting to know each other.


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    Hi Mel, thanks a lot for your great review and for pointing out the mistake. More is to follow soon.All the best. Ulla:)
Comment from doggymad
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All those tear speak of the emotional roller coaster of reuniting with your mother.

She sure was one organised lady. Good job you got over before she moved

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
    That is so true. It was lucky I found her before she moved. I am glad that you are reading.Thanks for the great review. All the best. Ulla
Comment from seaglass
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Itust have cost a fortune to ship much over the sea
O think I would have unloaded a lot a started over but that's just me. I think you have a typo with tearful, it looks like two words

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    Hi Seaglass, thanks a lot for your great review. More is to follow soon. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Drew Delaney
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This story is so amazing. I love how your writing is just getting better and better with each chapter. It shows that the more one writes, the better one gets. Practice makes perfect, like they say.

I am so into this story. Keep up the great work.

Drew xx

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Hi Drew, Thank you so much. What a great compliment you are paying me. I'm so pleased that you follow this. All the best. Ulla
Comment from RoseAnderson
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A very enjoyable glimpse into you. This part is terrific:
It never ceased to amaze me every time I recognised another trait that I had inherited. It thrilled me. In fact, it was such a novelty. What most people took for granted I was only starting to discover at the grand old age of fifty one.

Well written and makes me want to know more.

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Thank you so much, and I do hope that you will read on. All the best. Ulla
Comment from c_lucas
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It is a good thing that families can come together. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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decided tomove (to move) back to Denmark

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Thank you so much for reading and I am very pleased that you like it. All the best . Ulla
reply by c_lucas on 01-Feb-2016
    You're welcome, Ulla. Charlie