Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

He he he I try to eat less but eating less eats at me..
Well I like your mono stitch poem
This is the season for overeating unfortunately ///especially in the south of USAeverytime I turn around there is more to ear///sigh '
God bless

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

i am happy that I made you laugh with the message of this one line poem. Thanks a lot too, for the encouraging and excellent stars. God bless. Susan

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine monostich poem
It takes a lot of will power to stick to the usually bland diet
and the work out as well
The more you exercise the hungrier you get
Well done, says a lot in one line.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks for considering this a fine monostich poem. Yes, it's true, the more we exercise, the more we crave for food. Thanks too, for the generous and inspiring stars. God bless. Susan

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Susan. Kumusta amiga? Sorry I haven't been around to review or post but this internet here is all but dead.

I used to dislike these little tiny pieces but from time to time one just jumps up and gives me a good chuckle such as this just did. I'm on a "seafood diet" I see food and I eat it lol. Well done my frind. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Oh I am really happy that I made you laugh, my friend. We are on the opposite end, mate, I really dig short pieces especially those popularized by the Japanese poets. I am also a confirmed free verse addict. Thanks again my friend for the warm, encouraging and inspiring stars. God bless. Susan

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I've never heard of this poetry form before but through the instructions, I think you ailed it. Cute and humorous. Excellent picture to add to the fun. We'll done.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks for considering this cute and humorous. Thanks a lot too, for the warm and inspiring stars. My friend, please visit Poetry Dances, also in this site, FanStory. All the poetic forms are there , including the Monostich, you can select the poetic forms that you particularly like and make a go of it. God bless.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Yes, if it is indeed futile, the problem will persist and food becomes order of the day.
I have never before heard of the form, but by its description, it is captured well.
Have a good day.
RGstar

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot RGStar for the warm and inspiring stars. My friend you can visit Poetry Dances, also in this site(FanStory). All the poetic forms are explained and defined in that section including the Monostich. You have a wide selection of all the poetic styles that you can explore. thanks for the positive response. Susan

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

LOL - hey! She's on MY diet! Listen, you have inspired me to try one of these, my dear - I've never written a monostich poem, but this looks like fun! Thanks so much for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot Dawn for the positive and generous stars. I am really happy that I made you laugh with this piece. try the monostich, it's really fun. God bless. Susan

reply by Dawn Munro on 10-Dec-2015

My pleasure. :)

Comment from Poetofheart2013

Excellent

very cute poem in just those few words you said just what you want to say.
And did in a way that everyone knew what you mean.
I really enjoy reading it.
Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks for enjoying this monostich and thanks too, for considering this very cute. Thanks a bunch for the warm, encouraging and generous stars. God bless. Susan

reply by Poetofheart2013 on 08-Dec-2015

Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

Interesting way to write a poem...I don't think I've ever heard of it before...it rather spells out what its about quickly....if its for a contest good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for the warm response and the inspiring , excellent stars. Please do visit the Poetry dances , also in this site(FanStory.com) All the poetic forms and styles are defined and described with specific examples. God bless.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Susan, this is a simply brilliant monostich one liner my friend, very witty and very well written with great accompanying artwork my friend.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks my friend for considering this a brilliant monostich one liner. Oh my , i am deeply humbled by your positive remarks. Thanks too, for the excellent stars. God bless. Susan

reply by Eric1 on 08-Dec-2015

It was a brilliant monostich Susan.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

In order to lose weight, one must have a plan. The Mediterranean diet works for me. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot Charlie for considering this piece very well written. Thanks again for the inspiring, excellent stars. God bless. Susan