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The Quest

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Finding My Roots

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Comment from barkingdog
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That was certainly a coincidence that Bente had a friend who worked in the Foreign Ministry. And she called you right away. I can't imagine your excitement to have such help.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much. Yes I was starting to get much more excited about the whole exercise. Next we'll see what happens. All best. Ulla
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Once again, your biography was a smooth read, and highly polished - I noticed only two very minor edits needed -one a comma to add (for direct address), the other, a place where the comma isn't needed. :)

1) "It's for you(,) Ulla." - add comma
2) "...my last thoughts before I fell asleep(,)" - remove comma

Nicely done!

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much for a very encouraging review. The corrections have already been done. All best. Ulla
reply by Dawn Munro on 04-Sep-2015
    You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Eigle Rull
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I wish I had a 6 left for this very well written chapter to your story. It was so interesting to hear how she met the lady who gave Marianne her phone number. It is progressing very nicely. I hope she'll get some info soon. This chapter held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent, my friend. Best wishes to you.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Arr, thank you so much. It's the thought that counts and I am just so happy that you liked it. I hope you will keep following my story. Ulla
Comment from Bryana
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Dear Ulla, I'm so interested in your biography,
I'm so glad your aunt Grethe suggested you
look for your biological mother. Now I'm so
eager to know if you succeed in finding her.
I like the way you write, you keep your reader
interested from the beginning.
Good luck to you.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much, Bryana. I am so pleased that you like it. More to follow soon. All best. Ulla
Comment from seaglass
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This quest is developing in an interesting way. leads come from such strange places in life. I imagine getting a lead from an X husband's new wife.Looking forward to where this path leads you.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Excactly, it was such a surprise and one that spurred me on. Thanks a lot for your review. Ulla
Comment from CelticSkye
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I very much enjoyed this chapter. As my own mother is adopted I understand what it can take to find a biological parent. Your writing has great flow and was very easy to read, and this story is very engaging. I look forward to more!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Thank you so muchfor your encouraging review. I am so glad you like it. Al lbest. Ulla
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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I am feeling the excitement with you in this piece, Ulla. What a wonderful turn of events. Your writing seems to have settled into a nice flow, and the dialogue is carrying your readers along, Giddy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
    Hi Giddy, I am so glad you like it and thank you for an encouraging review. All best. Ulla
Comment from Michaelk
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As I was reading, it suddenly struck me that Grethe could be her long lost mother. I don't know why. Maybe it was the surprise you had when Tommy asked about her.
I know I'm probably off base and just trying to solve a mystery without all the clues.
I am starting to feel a little more feeling. A little more desire from you to find the answer. I think it was the excitement of having help and seeing actual potential rather than just dead ends.
Good chapter. The hunt is on.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much Michael. I am afraid that you'll have to see what is going to happen. It is true that I was a little more curious after the latest development. Thanks again for your great review. Ulla
Comment from Serendipity!
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in surprise(,) asking how he knew what we had been doing. (Should their be a comma here?)
This is very interesting especially since it is based on truth. Wondering what will happen next.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
    Thank you so much. I am glad you like it so far. More to come. All the best. Ulla
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Oh ,this story is indeed a page turner. I am really
interested and hope you do find your mother. I just
want to keep on reading and help you all I can with support. LOL Well done Ulla. Hurry with the next chapter please! Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
    Nancy, thank you so much. I am so pleased that you follow and that you like it. I promise more is soon to follow. Best regards. Ulla